8 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Pam's dream was so funny - was her shouting out about turtles a foreshadowing of the gift basket episode? I'm so glad you had Roy and Pam part amicably when he brought her home, instead of getting back together.
Date: October 26, 2007 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Yes! I was so happy to see you'd updated. Great second chapter. I love Michael/Jim moments, and you did it so well! It didn't need to longer; perfect as is. You're instincts were right there.
9 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 07:29 am Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Great job. Can't wait for the next installment!
Date: October 25, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
Ahhh! So cruel to leave it there! Write. More. Now.
Please?
9 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
I love how, when you least expect it, Michael can be so intuitive, so oddly in touch with a situation that he actually has moments where he seems like a normal person. :) I find moments like that, with Michael so touching. :)
And now. Pam has answered the door. What's going to happen?? Great job!!
Date: October 25, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces
really nice story
I love AUs and this is one of my faves