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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2007 04:43 pm Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings

Great job on the conversation/confrontation between Jim and Pam:

'Why now?' She repeated. He didn't respond, so she turned her back to him.

'I saw you. I saw you leave with Roy.' he said, his voice barely above a whisper.

She spun around and looked at him. 'And I've seen you with Karen. Everyday.' 


 'I broke up with her.' he said quietly as she walked towards the front door."


 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2007 11:25 am Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings

It's Jim. I mean, great story. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2007 08:43 am Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings

Keep going!  I'm on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2007 10:28 pm Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings

ooo, this is getting so good!

Reviewer: mothclubber88 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2007 07:32 pm Title: The Joy and Sorrow That it Brings

Yay! It's getting to the good part--hehe (Well, the whole thing is the good part)! So well written. Very, very nice. I love it.

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