9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Cold Open
This is like the awesomest awesome blossom there ever was.
You write all of the characters so wonderfully. Seriously...you've got all of them down. I laughed out loud a few times reading this. I love it and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
Date: October 31, 2007 11:26 pm Title: Cold Open
This is really fun so far. I think Jim and Pam's costumes are perfectly understated, but clever, like them.
I also think the dialogue is quite good: faced paced and funny.
But, even with his affinity for Battlestar Galactica, I hope we learn why Dwight would dress like a girl!
Nice work!
8 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Cold Open
This was really nice! The whole baby think caught me off guard. But how did Angela know? Well update soon, cause I want to find out! It's great so far! Yay!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Cold Open
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
I can totally see this happening. Sure you're not an actual writer for the show and you're giving us some spoilery goodness? No? Darn.......
Author's Response: Me? A script writer? That's a sweet thought but I'm just TheRabbit, who spends way too much time in her own imagination.
9 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 06:04 am Title: Cold Open
I absolutely love it! Big smiles make for a happier Halloween : )
Date: October 30, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Cold Open
Oh man! I LOST IT at Michael's talking head. Seriously- my roommate thinks I'm nuts! Great opening. Can't wait to read more!
Date: October 30, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Cold Open
Lordy, i was cracking up the whole time i read that (:
everything about it was hilarious, and i could really see it being put on the show!
Date: October 30, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Cold Open
You aren't going to believe this, but the first draft of the Halloween story I just posted had a scene where Michael pretends to rob the office with a fake gun. I'm not kidding! I took it out because it just wasn't working with the rest of my story. I see now that it fits much better here. And the additional information of Michael pretending to be OJ? Well, that's way better than what I originally had.
Nice job!