10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:16 am Title: The Poster
Oh, I am loving this! Absolutely perfect in every way. Andy's talking head cracked me up, and I love that you had him moonwalking over to Angela's desk. And that poster was just such an incredibly sweet gift for Angela. It shows his observant nature, and that he cares about what she likes. And I love the exchange about the rockin' babies/jazz babies and how he instantly changed what he liked just to match her, because that is so very Andy. So eager to please. Loved Angela's faint smile at the poster, and her gentle refusal of it. You can see that he's already wearing her down. And my heart broke for Andy when his smile disappeared and he rolled the poster back up. Oh, so sweet! Love it! Oh, and I also love that Andy is going to go caroling with Kevin and Kevin's only going for the cookies. Hee, perfect.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked this chapter. What I tried to do was just set up the way that Andy tried to romance Angela (albeit unsuccessfully) and that he was cracking her armor a little bit. Or, as I said in the summary, he's basically working the wear down. Thank you for the review firthgal.
Date: November 04, 2007 01:34 pm Title: The Poster
oh man the end Angela's talking head at the end was hilarious
spot on!
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing the talking heads for this story. I think that Andy and Angela have some of the most expressive ones out of all the characters. Thanks for the review JamLover101.
Date: November 04, 2007 11:15 am Title: The Poster
Oh my god, this is great! I was laughing throughout. You write Andy and Angela so well! I could actually see this scene playing out on the show. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it, I had a lot of fun writing it. Thank you for your review shan21.