Date: November 18, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm SO SORRY i haven't been able to help you beta this! DANGG, i have not been able to near my computer since the play has been beginning run-throughs. and i'm not going to be home for christmas break, im visitng family. i will try HARD to come back to this soon!
Author's Response: Don't worry about it. Life can happen to anyone. Still looking forward to the next installments of your stories. Have a great Thanksgiving - ken
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
“She made me…wxmychst,” Michael said, mumbling the last part of the sentence. This was so perfectly Michael!
Author's Response: Thanks for mentioning that bit. It made me laugh when I wrote it. It's the small, throw-away bits of the office that make it such fun to watch over and over again. Thanks for the review - ml
Date: November 11, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your song choices! But, a long time ago I remember one of the Beach Boys saying in an interview that "In my room" was actually about ...ummm...you know... self-gratification. :)
Author's Response: Oh...Really? Hmmm. Well then, pretty glad Pam didn't know that. 'Cause that would have been...awkward. See, that's why I like writing for you guys, I learns stuff. Should I put the DeVinyls on Jim's Pam list? Thanks for reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff, I'm invested in this. Although IMO Roy would not have suffieciently good musical taste to appreciate "Thunder Road." More of a Motely Crue fan, I bet. Your take on Pam's reaction is interesting...I guess I would find it suprising that it would hit her so hard to provoke that sort of reaction, but maybe. I know if I were Jim I would NOT be pleased.
Author's Response: Hmmm. Maybe Roy's dad liked the song and Roy grew up hearing it. I could see Roy liking the Crue more than the Cure, but he has pretty good taste in some area. After all, he chose Pam in high school. I know I'm walking a bit of a line with Pam's reaction to seeing Roy, and I thank you for the encouragement and the review!
Date: November 07, 2007 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
This is actually very good, and cute. I really enjoyed reading it and to be honest i had a few hand over mouth moments when reading.
Can't wait for chapter 2.
Author's Response: I'm kinda hoping that your hand was over your mouth to stop you from giggling, not because my writing made you ill. Will put up ch 2 as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 07, 2007 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a promising start- I LOVE Pam's conflicting feelings about Roy. She was with him for so long that they must have been happy, and I can really see how she might have a hard time watching him move on as she's moving on. I really liked that you included that feeling.
Also, Michael toting around a big old boombox with his iPod attached ia a great, silly image!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'm hoping to explore Pam's feelings a bit more in the next installment. Thanks for reviewing