10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2008 04:15 pm Title: Presentation
Awwww this was so lovely, poor Pam :(
Date: November 13, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Presentation
I have to say amazing job. Loves it!!!! I love how Jim's makes Pam day all better... wish he would come clean my apartment... mrh!!! :)
Author's Response:
thanks so much, mickey! Yeah, if only we could clone Mr. Halpert, the world would be a much better place.....
Date: November 12, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Presentation
I always grin when I see a notice in my e-mail that there's a new story from Moxie! And you never disappoint. I would love to have a Jim to help out around the house. And I did not know you could buy Red Lobster's biscuits at the grocery store! That made my day! Looking forward to the next chapter (and the next chapter of "Appeasing Ms. Beesly"!)
Author's Response: yep - bisquick makes the mix, so make sure you get some!! :-) Thanks for reviewing, stampsgal - I'm working on new chapters of various things as I type this!
Date: November 12, 2007 10:52 am Title: Presentation
Awww...of course Karen never had a key! Lovely. And let me tell you of nightmares you're going to give me with the notion of a female Michael Scott. Yikes! Nice way to play on the events of the most recent ep and Jim's managerial transformation.
Author's Response: Thanks, belsum - I really love the idea of Jim finding out this season what he really wants to do; let's hope the writer's strike gets settled soon so we don't lose the rest of the season! Thanks for reviewing, as always!
Date: November 11, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Presentation
Haha. Darn right she didn't have a key. ;) Very nice.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much - I'm glad I'm not the only one who see's the Office world in that way. :)
Date: November 11, 2007 09:03 am Title: Presentation
Sigh...can we ever get enough of those two? Loved every bit of this, especially the key exchange and the ending. I can't see Jim ever giving Karen a key to his place, although I'm sure she gave him one to her place shortly after BFV. Giving the key = committment. And no matter how much he tried to hide it and move on, Jim's heart belonged to one girl and it wasn't Karen.
Another winner, Mox!
Author's Response:
Can we ever get enough? God I hope not!! Can't wait until the writers are doing what they do best, though!
Thanks for the review, EH!
Date: November 11, 2007 04:49 am Title: Presentation
Ah, the symbolic key exchange. Sweet...and, of course Pam would wonder about Karen. And, not only did Karen not have the key to his apt., she didn't have one for his ignition either (ahem. Sorry, had to go there.) Nicely done, Miss Mox.
Author's Response: LOL - very true, colette. Perhaps that ignition issue might be addressed in the next chapter. ;-) Thanks for the review!
Date: November 10, 2007 10:58 pm Title: Presentation
I HATE IT!!
just kidding.. I loved it, like everything else you write. :)
Author's Response: Such. A. Dork. :-)
8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 10:39 pm Title: Presentation
"Oh, right," he scoffed. "I'm pretty sure I can't get legitimate work doing what I do best, and that's being your boyfriend."
Totally awesome line - as was "She never had a key," . (Thank heavens!)
Author's Response: nice to see you, kay! Thanks for the review!!
Date: November 10, 2007 10:28 pm Title: Presentation
Oh I love SO much about this, but I have to say that last moment for me was the best! I love that Pam isn't the "jealous type" but there's something inside of me that can't believe that she wouldn't have some lingering doubt issues...and this was JUST the right way to touch on that without making her seem crazy. LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Awww...thanks, LoveFool! I know that if *I* were Pam, I'd still need a little reassurance that Karen wasn't the threat she seemed like at the time....
9 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Presentation
Moxie, you really know how to make me happy : ) I felt like I was there. So, so sweet. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan - just doing my part to keep up our spirits while we wait out this strike!
Date: November 10, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Presentation
This will definitely keep us going during the strike. My stomach was doing flip flops during the key scene. You've done it again, Moxie, I'm hooked!
Author's Response: thanks, bees! Hopefully the next chapter will show Pam being very happy she entrusted the key to Jim....
Date: November 10, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Presentation
Adorable! SO glad Karen never got a key!
Author's Response: Thanks, JR - you know she never did, too!
Date: November 10, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Presentation
Eeeeexcellent. I especially love the ending, because we all know Pam is still a teensy bit jealous about Karen :)
Author's Response: I think she'll always have a slight sore spot regarding Karen, just as Roy will never make it onto Jim's Christmas card list. ;-) Thanks for th review, shan!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 02:07 pm Title: Presentation
Yes, a new Moxie series! I am looking forward to your unique perspective on S4 and beyond.
Author's Response: thanks so much!! I shall endeavor to keep you entertained, downtown - thanks for taking the time to review (and leave that comment on MTT!) You rock!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Presentation
GOOD! good thing Karen never had a key. or else there'd be hell to pay. hehe...seriously, i think you captured that little moment of bliss nicely - settling into domesticity, keeping the sparks alive.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so, CashBasket - writing happy Jam is such a nice way to try and survive this writer's strike. Thanks for taking the time to review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 11:29 am Title: Presentation
Aw, this was lovely. Left me with tingly feelings in my stomach because that's totally something Pam would do, and Jim would already be a step ahead of her, right? He always was. Thanks for another masterpiece, Moxie. :)
Author's Response: thanks for such a nice review, oobadnama! It's always nice to write happy Jam, isn't it? :-)
Date: November 10, 2007 11:20 am Title: Presentation
OMG, this is part of a SERIES! Sign me UP!
I love Pam teasing Jim, the paper-ho, and then cheering him up with something MUCH better than finger sandwiches and the FTC.
Nope, Karen never had the key to his house, or the key to his heart. Only. Pam.
Author's Response:
Well, given your influence, don't be surprised if the series rates higher than a K+ eventually.... :-)
Thanks for reviewing!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 10:09 am Title: Presentation
Aw. Now I feel better -- I was watching The Merger last night. Ouch. I really like how you handled the moment of tension over Karen here. It was very subtle and believable.
Author's Response: Ouch is right! Who watches The Merger on purpose? ;-) Thanks for reviewing, thirtypercent!!
Date: November 10, 2007 09:34 am Title: Presentation
Aww... Lovin this one Moxie!
Author's Response: Aww....thanks bootyz30!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 09:28 am Title: Presentation
I loved this story, Moxie. I got chills when I read the very end:
She turned back to open the door and felt his hand on her shoulder.....
"She never had a key,"
Everything leading up to it was so spot on The Office too. Keep 'em coming. I have a feeling we're going to need a lot of this type of fanfic to get us through the drought.
Author's Response: Thanks, Abigail - I certainly hope the strike ends soon - I could never match the genius of Mike and Jen and Paul and company..!
8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 09:23 am Title: Presentation
Another gem Moxie.
Author's Response: thanks so much, jinx! I appreciate the encouragement :-D
Date: November 10, 2007 09:16 am Title: Presentation
time4moxie, you're my favorite story writer ever. You could write about Jim and Pam going to the bathroom and I'd be riveted. Excellent, once again.
Author's Response: LOL - you're too much, nbyevu!! I appreciate the support though! Hope you enjoy the rest of the series, and thanks for taking the time to review - it's like early Christmas for me! :-)
Date: November 10, 2007 08:47 am Title: Presentation
Aww cute, I like this.
Author's Response: thank you, AvilaGrace - I hope the rest of the series entertains as well!! :-)
Date: November 10, 2007 08:29 am Title: Presentation
This was wonderful. It felt so natural and in character. And I love that Jim had the key made for ages, just waiting for a sign to give it to her. Brilliant
Author's Response: thanks so much, shootingstars - I like to think that Jim's got lots of plans for he and Pam...it's just a matter of waiting for the right moments. Thanks for reading! :-)