8 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Demonstration
Red Lobster biscuits..... spaghetti on spiral pasta.... Jim cooking and cleaning - the win-win-win of yumminess!!
Author's Response: so true!! Thanks for the review, kay!
Date: November 16, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Demonstration
Oh how I love every letter of this!
I sense a new addiction coming on. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks, bees - I'm working on it! (and where is some new stuff from you??)
Date: November 12, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Demonstration
Roy would never do anything like this. *sigh* I heart JIm. And I looooved this exchange:
Her mind speeding through that memory, her resolve softened. “Do you want me come over and tuck you in?” She teased.
“Not if you're going to be all condescending about it,” he replied with mock hurt. “I'll be just fine without you, thank you very much.”
And this got me too: “Hey,” his deep familiar voice answered.
Simple line, but I just imagined his voice and... I'm sorry, what was the question?
Author's Response:
LOL - yeah, he does SO MUCH with a 3 letter word, doesn't he?
Thanks for reviewing - you';re the best! :-)
Date: November 12, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Demonstration
Oh, Jim is love! Though if he did my laundry without asking, I'd probably wring his neck (some things just don't go in the dryer!). There really is no better feeling than coming from a really long day and having everything already taken care of for you.
Author's Response: yeah, I might make a reference to Pam's concern over his laundry skills - but remember, this is a guy who voluntarily uses fabric softener, so I think he was pretty careful. ;-) Thanks so much for the review, Jenn!
Date: November 12, 2007 03:14 pm Title: Demonstration
Ok I have to find a way to make the smile leave my face after that---he is the cutest boyfriend ever!!
Author's Response: yes, Jim Halpert is the perfect boyfriend. If only we could bring him to life! Thanks for reading!!
Date: November 12, 2007 02:25 pm Title: Demonstration
Looooooooooove it. Seriously, where can I order a Jim? I'm sure he'd be on backorder, but I'd gladly wait.
P.S....will their be a spin-off written for Jim, Pam, and the purple number?
Author's Response:
You have been added to the list. Once the cloning process has been perfected we'll be rushing you out your very own Jim Halpert. :-) And as for your P.S. - stay tuned for our final chapter. :-D
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Demonstration
That is just so much sweetness I had to eat some leftover Halloween candy. Seriously. Reese's pieces are in front of me right now.
Author's Response: Just make sure you floss afterwards! I will not be held responsible for cavities. :-)
Date: November 12, 2007 02:00 pm Title: Demonstration
Hi, I'd like to place an order to delivery. One (1) Jim Halpert please. ASAP.
This is just lovely. Left a ridiculous smile on my face :)
This part especially was so brilliantly expressed:
How someone could manage to cram that much sadness and despair and the image of homeless orphans into a two letter word was beyond her. She was pretty sure he didn't do it on purpose, but just the way he'd let the h-sound linger in the air was like releasing a mushroom cloud of guilt on her shoulders.
It just sums up that feeling of Pam's of being completely unable to resist anything Jim does that even the word Oh has this major effect on her.
Just one typo I noticed:
Jim nodded, trying not as deflated as he felt., I'm guessing you meant not to look as deflated as he felt.
Thanks for a great read :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the typo notice - I can read something twelve times, then the minute I post it there's always one error! So glad you liked it; I shall have to put the Halpert order on backorder until we can get the cloning process perfected. I assure you it will be worth the wait, however! ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 09:28 am Title: Demonstration
Oh, they're so sweet. I could quote my favorite parts, but that would take forever, so let's just say, "the part where they're being cute together." Very nice.
Author's Response: hey - I was just thinking of you today when I was sitting here wondering where my energy to write NaNo this year has disappeared to! Thanks for the review!! :-)
Date: November 12, 2007 09:13 am Title: Demonstration
Moxie--I absolutely love this story! It's so well-written and true to both Jim and Pam's characters, that if I didn't know better, I'd think you were Greg Daniels in disguise. Please, please continue as it really helps with the impending hiatus blues. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Now that is the best compliment I could ever receive (I <3 Greg!!!) - I'm so glad if this story is helping you get through the strike. I'll do my best to continue! Thanks for reviewing, cricket!
9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 08:50 am Title: Demonstration
Man...I need this Jim to come to MY house! heehee
Author's Response: First, we need to clone him - then we'll send him out all over the world! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12, 2007 08:49 am Title: Demonstration
“So it was okay that I just barged into your apartmet and did all this?”
“Definitely,” she nodded, cuddling closer. “I could definitely get used to this.”
“Good,” he replied softly. “Good.”
Oh, squee goes my silly fangirl heart. And of course he's cooking Italian food, because he's in love with it.
Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Would you believe I completely forgot about the Italian food link? I guess my brain just absorbed the information and knew what to tell me to write. ;-) Glad your fangirl heart enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing, dear!
Date: November 12, 2007 08:48 am Title: Demonstration
Pam hated when Jim said “Oh.” How someone could manage to cram that much sadness and despair and the image of homeless orphans into a two letter word was beyond her.
sometimes jim's face makes me think of that montage in Lady and the Tramp of the sad puppies in the pound.
also, if a man came into my house, made me dinner, cleaned my filth AND DID ALL MY LAUNDRY my brain would explode and then i would THROW myself at him. literally. i'd get airtime.
Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter was total wish fulfillment on my part. :-) Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 08:37 am Title: Demonstration
i love this! And the Red Lobster biscuit thing was great! Years ago before they were available in the stoe, my mom badgered the cook for some of the batter. Less than a year later, they were out for sale at the supermarket! Go figure. Red lobster biscuits + a cleaned apartment = I hope Jim gets laid. ;)
Author's Response:
Red lobster biscuits + a cleaned apartment = I hope Jim gets laid. ;)
I expect he's hoping so too.... ;-D
Thanks for the review, sharipep!
Date: November 12, 2007 08:22 am Title: Demonstration
Aww! Can Jim come over to my house and clean and make dinner and be distracting? Well, he already does one of those things anyway.
P.S. Impatient Jim is 10 kinds of adorable.
Author's Response:
I think if I could get him to come over to my house I wouldn't give a damn about the house..... ;-)
I also think there is one more chapter to this story coming. Maybe something along the lines of grateful!Pam....
Date: November 12, 2007 08:17 am Title: Demonstration
So sweet, Moxie : ) We always knew he was the perfect man!
Author's Response: Yes, is pretty much the closest thing we'll ever find to perfect, isn't he? Lucky, lucky Pam. :-)