9 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 06:58 am Title: Breakable
Oh, that was so good. I could cry.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 06:07 am Title: Breakable
So much love for this story. I love how Jim is protective of her even when he's angry. The way he buckles her in and then later helps her get out of the car.
I was sad when he wanted to go home but so happy that he came back.
This is a great story...more, soon, please :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
I love how the song just depicts the image of someone buckling someone into a car. I mean, its romantic in a way, huh? I love it...all thanks is due to Ingrid's songs....they inspire me to write.
Date: November 13, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Breakable
Absolutely beautiful. Makes my heart swell. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
10 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Breakable
This was beautiful. I don't know what else to say- just beautiful dialogue, descriptions, song, everything!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review! I hope to have more on the way....
Date: November 13, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Breakable
This chapter was just mesmerizing. I loved it. I love dark, brooding Jim.
Author's Response:
Thanks Ab! Can I call you Abby?? Hehehe. I love DarkJim as well. There something about that side of him that makes me wanna burst into flames. Gah....
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: November 13, 2007 04:50 pm Title: Breakable
love it love it love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: November 13, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Breakable
As with your last chap, this is absolutely beautiful. I love this song too, probably even more than Keep Breathing. This is just so vividly expressed, and the attention to little details on your descriptions makes them really complete. Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Don-kah(that's German if you didnt know). You're reviews are always so nice....you're great! I pride myself in the fact that I can imagine whats going on and actually put it into to words (well, sometimes)....so, thanks for pointing that out. I appreciate it all. And, yes, I'll be doing more on this shortly. I love all of Ingrid's stuff...
8 [Report This]Date: November 13, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Breakable
Another beautiful chapter. I felt badly that Pam was so excited for her family to meet Jim, and then her brother spoiled everything by his smart ass comment that ended up hurting both of them.
"So, she grabbed her jacket and keys and pulled open her front door to reveal him standing there, heart on his sleeve as the snow glistened on the ground."
Awesome line. I'm glad that when Pam went to leave to go to him, he was at her door.
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. And, as for you pointing out your favorite line, that makes me all sorts of excited and happy. Thanks!
Date: November 13, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Breakable
How about you get paid in....... reviews??? Orr....
http://www.ecu.edu/cs-admin/financial_serv/images/Money_Coins.jpg
Will you accept virtual money? Or SB? I'm on it.
Sorry i wasn't able to get this back to you last night but you know sickness is no fun at all my friend. I might have another chatper for you though...... :) So be tuned. I have to work till 8 so no homework + being bored = v. fic productive WBJ :)
Oh back to fic: LOVELY JOB. I like to imagine this was me and not Pam in thsi story and it makes it ten times more happy ;) except the whole fight thang. Jim's speech? breathless.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! For the money....and the review. You're awesome...you know that. Thanks a bunch for spending so long on helping me develop this fic. It's because of you that Jim and Pam went to meet her parents...and the reason everybody loved this chapter....thanks!