1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2019 11:40 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this chapter. It is a great capstone (yes I know it's not the last chapter) to Jim's earlier angst, reminding both him and us of his better nature under the frustration. Well done.
Date: December 04, 2007 11:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Trying really hard to choke back tears here. That letter, the image of Pam spooning her sobbing mother, wow.
Date: November 30, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
What was I saying about Jim being perfect? Yep. Because he loves her as perfectly as he can, and that's all you can ever ask.
Date: November 19, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww Jim is the best boyfriend ever...I'm glad Pam finally let him be there for her...poor thing! Great job with this, you have me completely hooked and I can't believe there will only be one more chapter! I hope that Jim and Pam's dad get to have a heart to heart!
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed Jim and Frank's heart to heart! I think Jim got the closure that he needed during that conversation. Thank you so much for the feedback JRaddict!
Date: November 19, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
OH my gosh I think I'm crying. That was so wonderfully written and I am SO sad now lol. This is just beautiful. I love it I love it I love it.
Date: November 19, 2007 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Jim's letter definetely made me cry
and Jim holding Pam in the bed was so heartwrenching
Date: November 19, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh. My. God. It's great! Please continue as quickly as you can :)
Date: November 19, 2007 11:54 am Title: Chapter 5
AWWWWWW!! I love it when Jim writes Pam letters!!!
Beautiful story; I can't wait until it's finished.
Date: November 19, 2007 11:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Add me to the list of weepers...and trust me, that hardly ever happens to me with fanfic. This chapter was just true love on a page.
Such a well-calibrated follow-up to Jim’s confusion/angst in the earlier chapters. Bravo for making both ends of the spectrum ring so true.
Author's Response: True love on a page....wow. Colette. That's what I think of YOUR stuff...Wow. Thank you so much for saying that. This was just so satisfying to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: November 19, 2007 10:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Promise me you'll let me go first
Wow. Way to kill me at 10 in the morning. GUH. That was amazing. And heart-wrenching. And just YES. I'm going to stop before my rambling becomes truly incoherent. Well done.
9 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 5
LoveFool this continues to be awesome. And confusedbutohsoinlovewithPamJim is one of my favoritest Jims of all time. We should all be so lucky to have someone like him in our life. Really well done.
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 5
omg, so wonderful. wow this is such a fantastic emotional journey and I'm so impressed with the way that you're writing it down. Thanks for this story.
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 08:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh...okay, I get it. This is where I'm supposed to leave some sort of coherent thought about this, right?
I'm sorry, but I can't do that right now. I'm afraid you've come along and pretty much swept every coherent part of my brain right off the 'ol table.
Yep.
So, uh... wow. :)
Amazing.
Author's Response: Cousin Mose! Thanks for the review! Sorry I broke your brain....but it seems like a good kind of broken, so I'll take it! :-)
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 08:36 am Title: Chapter 5
'Breakable' is a profoundly tragic yet lovingly real work of art LoveFool. This chapter could have come with a 'have tissue handy' warning but other than that, it was perfection.
Date: November 19, 2007 08:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Aw; I'm sad that there's only one more chapter, but I've certainly enjoyed the ride. Quick updates, too!
Date: November 19, 2007 08:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Look, I'm an accountant, see? Adding one comma and subracting one comma...that's a wash. A zero sum balance. It amounts to nothing. But it was a sneaky way for me to read this first! MWAH HAHA! Bawling at 5:15 am on a Monday is just a great way to go. From the first image of Pam spooned up behind her mother by the light of the Christmas tree, I was a goner, and now I'm tearing up at work just thinking about it. You're so...great.
Author's Response: hehehe...thanks Jim hehehe. But now I know you're evil plan to get sneak peaks! lol
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 08:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Exquisite. And you made me cry. Again.
Author's Response: hehe...sorry about that Shassafrass...hmm...or am I? lol
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 08:05 am Title: Chapter 5
This is just so beautiful. Jim's letter to Pam? Perfect and right and just wow. It made me tear up a little. This story has been an emotional experience. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks GodinThisChilis! I'm so glad you liked the story so much. The letter was really fun to write and definitely the part that moved ME as the writer the most.
Date: November 19, 2007 08:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Damn you! I have to leave for work in 5 minutes and my makeup is ruined from all the crying. You are too good at this. Stop it.
Author's Response: hehehe...I'm so sorry for ruining your make-up! That seems to be going around! Thanks so much for the review! :-)