Reviews For The baby shower
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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was a very cute story and you did a great job  keeping everyone in character.  Dwight taking the bathroom signs down to make a "no kissing" sign was a riot!  I did notice some typos that you might want to correct.  It looks like this was your first story here - so congratulations!  Hopefully we'll see more from you.  And don't forget that you can avail yourself of the betas here at MTT if you want!

Reviewer: JamGirl Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2007 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really good! We need more script fics to get us through the strike.

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