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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Dragonfly

What a beautiful story. I especially loved this line - "She told her last best friend about her first best friend just once, to explain her sadness on the sixth anniversary"



Author's Response: Thank you.  I can't tell you how nice specific reviews are.

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2006 09:01 am Title: Dragonfly

My god, this was beautiful.  I stopped breathing at the laying her first best friend to rest line, then exhaled so loudly after the last sentence.  WOW. 

Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm so pleased that you enjoyed and appreciated it.  I was kind of nervous about the subject matter.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 09:46 pm Title: Dragonfly

So, so good! Fantastically economical use of language!

LOVE IT.

And love Jim, but that's another matter ;)



Author's Response: Thank you.  My goal was to express exactly what I wanted to as concisely as possible.  I'm so pleased that you saw that.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2006 08:33 am Title: Dragonfly

You have a gift with words. The whole paragraph about Roy was beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the review and the compliment.

Reviewer: diddly day Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 11:52 pm Title: Dragonfly

For drabble, this is pretty damn poetic.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review and the compliment.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 12:01 pm Title: Dragonfly

I loved this piece.  So simple, but very evocative.


Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate that.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 09:52 am Title: Dragonfly

This was so lovely & so sad. It was such a well told short story--packs a lot of emotional punch in so few words.

Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure how well the theme would be received.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 07:48 am Title: Dragonfly

Oh, that's amazing.  *loves Jim*

Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, Jim is the perfect man. ;) I so <3 him.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 06:53 am Title: Dragonfly

How horribly sad. Beautifully crafted.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

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