10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 04:26 pm Title: When She Knows
The Roy situation was handled so well - you managed to convey all the emotions that Roy was going through with so few words. And I totally loved your line that she was almost out of the car before it stopped moving and he was running out of his house before her car door even closed. That was so romantic and just how I would expect to see it happen IRL. Awesome story.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I can't help it, I just want them together already!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 09:01 am Title: When She Knows
Incredible. Such a unique take on them, this. Just beautiful, really - you are an incredible writer.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I'm a fan of yours, so that means a lot.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 06:20 am Title: When She Knows
Wow that chapter was intense but oh so good.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I appreciate the review.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:55 am Title: When She Knows
Seriously. How'd I miss this????
I adore what you've done here. I love these little drabbles. More. Please. Soon. :)
Author's Response: How did you miss it?.....Did you blink? It's fairly small. Thanks for the review and encouragment.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:50 am Title: When She Knows
It doesn't feel clunky to me, but I may be biased because I love the content so much! Poor Jim, trying not to hope; poor Roy, begging. Still, so much goodness!
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you. I really don't think Roy is a bad guy, but I still have a hard time feeling really bad for him. He totally takes her for granted. I can't stand it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:43 am Title: When She Knows
"People pray for what's being handed to her in a gift-wrapped package." - so true, and thanks for making Pam realise it.
Author's Response: Absolutely! Who doesn't want a Jim? Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2006 03:03 am Title: When She Knows
So sweet, and very true to the show, I think. She won't decide (if she does) till the last second, or near.
Author's Response:
Thank you, "true to the show" is a great compliment. As for her not deciding until the last minute - anything to keep us watching.
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 11:36 pm Title: When She Knows
It's not clunky at all. A lot of people are really put off by the idea that Pam dumps Roy, and runs into Jim's arms. But isn't that how Dawn and Tim did it? I mean, if you love someone that much, why waste anymore time? Very well done. I still can't believe this is "drabble." And with some of the other fics that are out there, this is refreshing.
Author's Response: I really, really appreciate the reveiw and compliment. And yes, that is exactly how Dawn and Tim did it. Besides, Pam and Roy haven't been an "actual couple" in a very long time. Also, when it's true love, it's not rebound.
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 10:35 pm Title: When She Knows
Perfect.
That's all I can say.
Author's Response: Wow. Perfect? That's a fairly huge compliment...Thank you.
9 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 09:28 pm Title: When She Knows
Not clunky at all. Beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate that.
9 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 08:49 pm Title: When She Knows
Well, it totally works for me. :) I could imagine Pam finally deciding to act, and not stopping until it is all over. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks. I imagine her being panic-stricken once she gets it all worked out.
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2006 08:46 pm Title: When She Knows
No, no, this doesn't feel clunky at all - it's wonderfully passionate.
Author's Response: Thank you. Isn't it interesting that such a down-to-earth relationship can inspire huge passion in so many people?