Reviews For The Crash
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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2018 07:37 pm Title: Act Three and Tag

Love this! I was a little hesitant because of the format but YOU totally made it work! That call with Mose had me cracking up.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Act Three and Tag

Hey, sorry it took me so long to review, but I really enjoyed this ensemble piece.  You did a great job with everyone's voices; I really felt with the camera moves and the stage directions that I was watching an episode.  Other reviewers have mentioned some of the very funny lines, I giggled at many places in this story.  Of course Creed would know the password, ha!

Nice job.  You even titled this fic similar to a real episode.  :)



Author's Response: No problem with the delay, you're my only review for this Act [insert sad face]. No I'm kidding, but I'm glad that you liked the voices and camera direction. While obviously I don't have the writing ability to make something on par with The Office, I do at least try to make it 'feel' kinda like one. And I'm glad you noticed the title, that was on purpose too. Just something to add to the idea of it being a "real" episode. Thanks for the review EverybodyHurts.

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