10 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2007 04:43 am Title: When she calls from the rocks...
"He is a simple being consisting of a single wet opening and a monolithic protrusion." Wow. Unbelievable. I love how you take these scenes that we all know and put your own unique Shassafrass-y spin on them.
Date: November 21, 2007 10:53 pm Title: Morpheus...
You slay me. I don't usually review "sexier" fics, so to speak, but these chapters are just...elegant. It's like each dream shows what they want (and will ultimately find) in each other, and you've written with such a sultry style that it's hard to look away. Bravo, bravo, and keep 'em coming (<< ummm...)!!! -CH
Date: November 21, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Samurai...
This:
“Beesly, Beesly, Beesly…you are...so...beautiful...” His voice is like gravel coated in chocolate.
is insanely erotic because we all know how his voice would sound saying those words.
Love, love episode related smut. And that scene at the dojo, despite looking like simple horseplay, carried undertones of want and desire and Jim's need to somehow just touch her. Thank goodness he can snuggle with her during bedtime stories or anytime now.
I'm still waiting for my ping pong sex story. :) Think about it.
8 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 12:45 pm Title: Samurai...
Wow. This was extra-awesome, like awesome covered in hot fudge sauce with whipped cream and a cherry. And sprinkles. (not the dead cat either!)
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 11:36 am Title: Samurai...
CHRIST.
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 11:35 am Title: When she calls from the rocks...
Jesus....
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 10:57 am Title: When she calls from the rocks...
Man, you write dreams so well. They are so vivid, but with just the slight touch of something not real (like the public sex at the dojo). What's interesting to think about is that these types of dreams are the ones that stay with you in pretty vivid fashion the next day. These could explain some of the staring Jim and Pam did.
Great imagery. Great details. Can you tell I'm trying to write a review that doesn't make me look like a perv for loving these as much (and rereading them as much) as I do?
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 09:57 am Title: Samurai...
i definitely shouldn't be reading MA-rated fic at work...but i can't help it. great parallel angst/smut-fics. your smut is the prettiest smut...of all the smut.
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 09:51 am Title: Samurai...
i can't tell if the dojo sex really happened or not, but who cares, it was HOT AS HELL!! whew!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 05:57 am Title: Samurai...
Hell, if Jim had touched MY stomach, I could have come hands-free! LOL
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 05:53 am Title: When she calls from the rocks...
Heehee....be as immature as you want. I won't mind. :o)
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 05:34 am Title: Samurai...
Shassafrass, I am as happy as a kid on Christmas : ) Brilliant.
Date: November 20, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Samurai...
Pam totally had this dream after the day at the dojo.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Samurai...
Wow, my new favorite fanfic. Keep them coming (TWSS) and yes, pun intended.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:37 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
What am I thankful for this holiday season?
Story titles that are followed with "by Shassafrass Rated: MA"
Man, you knocked it out of the park with this one and I'm interested to see where you take this next.
6 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:21 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
"She’s a plain version of pretty, even a little frumpy, to be truthful." Gee, that was a little harsh.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:14 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
No, no need to be more mature, I like this story a great deal! You should continue it.
Date: November 20, 2007 09:04 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
There can never be enough smut. This was awesome.
I need more smut so please continue.
Date: November 20, 2007 08:57 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
kjfdhsg.
yeah, that's about it. jfkhgd.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 08:51 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
NO! NO! NO! Maturity is sooooo overrated! ahem. What I meant to say was please, keep these coming, (TWSS?)
Date: November 20, 2007 08:33 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
Oooh, that was good, but not long enough. TWSS, I know, but you should write more smut, more seduction scenes, because they make me happy, k? And being mature is totally overrated.
Date: November 20, 2007 08:27 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
Don't help yourself. Really, now. We're all in this strike thing together, and if you stop with the smut, the studios win.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 08:27 pm Title: When she calls from the rocks...
Whoa...
That's hot.
Please do continue.