10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 07:40 am Title: Dear Sara (Epilogue)
Very, very sweet.
Author's Response:
Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 07:25 am Title: Dear Sara (Epilogue)
What a beautiful ending. I'm going to miss this!!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks - and also for being such a diligent reviewer!
10 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 07:22 am Title: Dear Sara (Epilogue)
*sighs in contentment* Oh, that's just lovely--yay for Sara!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the great reviews!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:52 pm Title: Do-over
I love do-overs :) This was a great Jim/Pam conversation--you balanced his and her reluctance really well.
Author's Response: Who wouldn't love them, when they involve Jim? Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:46 pm Title: Worlds Collide
YAY! Go Sara go :) I could really see that conversation happening between her & Pam--felt true to Pam's character.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Do-over
What a sweet and romantic "do-over"!
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 05:05 pm Title: Do-over
Yay, Pam! Good job (finally) taking some initiative!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 12:18 pm Title: Do-over
Yay for do-overs! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Just read your new fic and really enjoyed it too.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 10:12 am Title: Do-over
That was wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 09:34 am Title: Do-over
Oh, wow! What a great chapter to start the day! I love your blend of sweet/hot.
Author's Response:
Well, sweet and hot seem to be a natural combination for J&P. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 09:00 am Title: Do-over
Yay for Pam finally getting it. And how!
Author's Response: Yeah, I almost called this chapter 'About Time'. Thanks for the feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 08:35 am Title: Do-over
You build up and resolve the tension wonderfully here. Tentative, brave Pam and overwhelmed Jim- perfect.
Author's Response: Glad you said that - was hoping that arc would come through. Thanks!
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 08:17 am Title: Do-over
Awww... I am a sucker for happy endings. I'm so glad he gave her a do-over...errr, second chance! ;)
Author's Response: Glad you like it...but it's not (quite) finished yet...I think there's one last little bit left in me - though, not another do-over!
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 08:40 am Title: Worlds Collide
I really liked Sara here. Seemed very selfless of her to want to help Jim and to confront Pam in the gentle way that she did. Hope her efforts bear fruit!
9 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 08:16 pm Title: Worlds Collide
I like that Sara was there to shake Pam a bit. Jim needed an advocate for his case. :)
Author's Response: I agree. And I have to say, it was easy to project myself into Sara...as much as I love her, Pam needs a good shaking.
9 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 02:10 pm Title: Worlds Collide
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Great...more on its way!
8 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 11:43 am Title: Worlds Collide
I like it! Please continue! (P.S. - "assume" should be "as soon" in Pam's line about halfway through)
Author's Response: Oops - right you are! This is why you should always do that final proof read before posting. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 11:36 am Title: Worlds Collide
I like Sara and what she said. Good job
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 10:44 am Title: Worlds Collide
I loved this chapter, I thought it would be awkward but it wasn't. Especially loved this line - "It was as if Pam somehow recognized Sara as a new variable in the painfully delicate equation she was struggling to maintain with Jim" And the chapter title - awesome.
Author's Response: As always - thanks for the great feedback - and for being such a dedicated reviewer!
9 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 10:41 am Title: Worlds Collide
I think you struck just the right balance with Sarah.
Author's Response: Phew. Thanks!
9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Light of Day
I am really enjoying this story so far. I could see Jim with someone like Sara, and it is nice for him to have someone who he could be honest with. Plus, he deserved a little bit of non-tortuous passion in his life. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I agree, Jim deserves a little something. So glad you're enjoying the story!
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 07:48 pm Title: Light of Day
How in the world can Sara let him go? They seem to have so much in common, and seem to care about each other so much.
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Sara's Smile
First - love the title of this. (I'm a closet - well, not so much - Hall & Oates fan.) Second, what a great chapter - very believable. It's also comforting in a way to see him do something like this. Pam needs to find out, damn it. :o)
Author's Response: Very perceptive - I was thinking of that song (though I lost track of that band a zillion years ago.) And re: Pam - she may not find out everything, just what she needs to know...
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 12:50 pm Title: Dinner with an Old Friend
As usual, just lovely. And it's really an interesting premise, too, because I think we tend to assume that Jim's never been in love before - or maybe we just don't think about it. Off to read chapter 2....
Author's Response:
In my Jim-ology, he's had one serious love affair in his past, years ago...somehow it makes it more poignant for me if he kind of knows what that's like, knows what he's missing with Pam. Also, that she's the only one he's ever fallen for since...and we all know how that's worked out. Anyway, glad you're liking it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 12:36 pm Title: Light of Day
This has turned into the story that I'm most anticipating updates for. Good sign, yes? I'm loving this so much. Jim's reactions in this chapter were so true to character. I cannot wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: That's so great to hear! Thank you! Should be another update soon - totally ignoring my work today...this is so much more fun!