Date: September 27, 2009 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. Very believable dialogue especially for a conversation going on smack dab in the middle of the work day. Small details and descriptions of what they were doing were very poignant. I appreciated the lack of outright sex talk, which from Pam’s reaction when Roy mentioned it in the workplace reflects well on the subtlety of what was going on.
Date: January 01, 2007 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow- excellent, in character, and sweet. Less is definitely more sometimes and you've captured them perfectly here :-)
Date: December 31, 2006 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's possibly the most aww-worthy one-shot in the world. I loooooove it. Now make it come true please :) Hehe. Great job!
Date: November 04, 2006 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
that's awesome. some love between jim and pam. can't say i don't mind it. very good story though
Date: October 04, 2006 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. Totally in-character, and sweet, but not - uh - too descriptive...something I can imagine coming the show, and something I hope does come in the show. Definitely.
Seriously looking forward to seeing more from you!!
You are so sweet! Glad you enjoyed it. Still keeping my fingers crossed for these two:)
Date: September 12, 2006 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
you did a great job with the dialogue, sounds totaly naturally like them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
Date: September 04, 2006 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, you're definitely going to have to write more The Office fics. This was sweet and sexy, and I would really love to see something like this on the show. Here's hoping.
Author's Response: Thank you! Jim and Pam are wonderful muses.