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Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2008 05:23 pm Title: June

Yay for fanfic/calendar crossovers!  Great job with this chapter, Mox.  Yeah, that bride's bouquet is hideous, but HollyHedge Estate looks gorgeous. 

I don't care how long it takes you to finish this.  I'm proud of you for jumping back into your writing after a long hiatus.  You go, girl!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2008 03:27 pm Title: June

Moxie, I'm so happy you're continuing with this story.  It's so nice to have you back. 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2008 03:19 pm Title: June

Lovely to see this back, as you know.  I do think there are people in Pam's family that would have been glad to see Roy go.  It is not very hard to see when someone is not treating a person you love as well as they should, but sometimes you just have to sit back and let them know they need to change the situation.  So I really like that Jim ran into some people from Pam's life that seem to have had that experience.

Also, I can't be the only one that would love to see drunk Pam again, right?

I love that this story is back and look forward to reading the remaining months.

 

 

Reviewer: OfficeTragic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2008 12:34 am Title: May

Hi! I really hope you are going to finish this off one day! I am a big fan of your work and somehow only just discovered this one.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2008 11:00 am Title: May

Wow.  Almost up to the end of new episodes in this fantastic AU.  I can't wait to see what you do after that!  You continue to weave the events of the series in such an unexpected and believable way.  And I really like how you suggested the rest of the items in the envelop without feeling the need to actually delineate them.  Nice growth.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 05:49 pm Title: May

They're so adorable.  Love celebrating Christmas in February.   Is it possible for him to love her any more? Sigh. I think not. :)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 04:55 am Title: May

I was so happy to see this updated!

I loved the image of Pam reading her letter in the car in front of Jim. 

Do you mind if I open this now? I mean, read the letter?”


Jim looked at her again briefly, and shifted in his seat. “Um, no,” he replied, “That's fine.”

Oh, and all the beautiful, gushy things Jim puts in his letters!  Just wonderful.

Can't wait to hear about the rest of their year.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:36 pm Title: May

I love Jim's letters, they're so deeply personal. I kinda hope they'll get a chance to talk about the issues that are raised. Oh, and the thought of Jim carrying Pam around everywhere post-coal walk is adorable. *giggles*

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:23 pm Title: April

My favorite line: You're the best thing in my life, and I've always known that – even before I knew for sure that you were going to be so completely in my life.. *sigh* Oh my, Roy did get a punch in! Wow. And bouncy castle confessions... great chapter. =)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 05:44 pm Title: Prologue (or: Jim Has An Idea)

I get so excited knowing another letter and charm is coming with each update.  This one was beuatiful and heart warming.  I hope the next one is coming soon!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 05:24 pm Title: March

Aww, it sounds like they had a very trying month. How sad.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 05:15 pm Title: February

Loved the first paragraph. The special necklaces get names and the conversation about Chester -- sooo cute! I like how you're re-writing the third season through the letters. Aw Valentine's Day sounds like it was so sweet. And I was touched by how Jim knew that Phyllis took ideas from Pam's wedding.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 02:55 pm Title: January

Awww that letter was so sweet and heartfelt. *happy sigh* On to the next month!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Prologue (or: Jim Has An Idea)

Such a cute idea!! Sounds so romantic -- can't wait to see how it'll turn out!! =)

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 02:03 pm Title: May

oh moxie, you've done it again! This was fantastuc! Jim's letters make my chest ache every time. It's so wrong, but as soon as I read this line "Just wait to see where I hang it tonight," I saw Packer, haha. And the last line... *sigh*. I don't know how you manage to continually write perfect stories! Seriously, everything is always so on. Can't wait to see what awaits us on Christmas day!

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 01:48 pm Title: May

cute last line

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 01:17 pm Title: Prologue (or: Jim Has An Idea)

Love how you reworked "Beach Games" and "The Job" for this lower-angst version of S3. 

wherever you want to call home is where I'll call my home too

*sigh* 

Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 12:50 pm Title: May

You slay me, moxie. I want my own Jim Halpert so I can get letters like this-especially this month's! Can't wait for the next month!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 12:20 pm Title: May

Why are you so awesome?

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 12:12 pm Title: May

This story has been creeping around my mind lately, Moxie.  So nice to see an update.  Love the globe charm.  So sweet.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 04:31 pm Title: April

This was definitely worth the wait!

Jim talking about depression was an interesting layer in the story.  I also liked the little bit of steam between Jim and Pam.

You take all the time you need for this story.  I'll wait for every word!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 10:36 am Title: April

I continue to be awed and amazed at how neatly you're fitting in the events from the show into this alternate universe.  It all makes complete and total sense, too!  I liked the mention of Jim going to therapy.  It really does seem like something that he needed and that helped a lot.  I'm thoroughly enjoying this!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 08:52 am Title: April

Awww. So sweet. I love that he remembers that she's his best friend, and why. It's nice to get another chapter!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 07:23 am Title: April

I've missed you, Moxie!  So nice to see an update.  Reading the letters along with Pam make me feel like the proverbial fly on the wall : )  The castle charm is the best one yet.  While I would hope that their life together would be all sunshine and rainbows, it's refreshing to read about their struggles and how they get through them together.  The pregnancy scare and Jim's depression really add to the depth of the story.  More soon please?

Reviewer: hamrensel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 10:54 pm Title: April

I love this series. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.

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