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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2008 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

"All he could think about was how he was so hers for the taking, should she choose to take. She hadn't."

This was beautiful and so very sad for Jim.

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is amazing! In so few words you convey so much. And it's so wonderfully Jim.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Big Tuna. I have a much easier time writing Jim than any other character.

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