Date: September 27, 2009 11:38 pm Title: Madeleine :: Emerald Diner :: Nov. 1998
i'm liking this, but you might want to edit the mention of "david denman".... that was just kind of jarring and awkward. not to mention that the real david denman is a totally sweet guy.
Date: December 26, 2007 02:17 pm Title: Madeleine :: Emerald Diner :: Nov. 1998
This is such a different idea for a story, and I absolutely love it...I can't wait to read more.
(p.s. the David Denman reference was awesome)
Author's Response: thank you so much for the positive feedback!! haha, i was wondering if anyone would catch that. i didn't want to go right out and say Roy-- I have always imagined him as a bad tipper. Of course, except for when Pam was around :) I'm glad you like it so far.
Date: December 26, 2007 11:41 am Title: Madeleine :: Emerald Diner :: Nov. 1998
I love the name Holly and the fact that Jim made a "face" at the waitress. Cute!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm glad you like it so far and i hope you stay tuned! yay for Jim faces! :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2007 09:25 am Title: Madeleine :: Emerald Diner :: Nov. 1998
Aw, cute! I love the idea of learning about Jim through people who don't know him. I also liked your characterization of the waitress.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback! I'm glad you liked it so far :) The first waitress is kinda like me, and most of the things in here have actually happened, I just tried to make them more Jim-like haha. I hope you stay tuned :D
Date: December 25, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Madeleine :: Emerald Diner :: Nov. 1998
This was really cool! And refreshing! Madeleine reminded me of me. I would so drop my pen at a cute guys feet, and then be embarrassed. But also knowing me, I would probably drop is drink in his lap, too. I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I definitely based the first one off of myself-- I actually had a part with spilling a drink in there, but I took it out haha. I'm glad you like it so far -- I'm having a lot of fun writing it :)