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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 10:38 am Title: Rina :: Good Eats Diner :: May 2007

I know I should be commenting on each chapter- forgive me for being lazy. But this one is particularly skillful. The refrain of waiting, waiting, waiting...and then Jim, done with waiting...it's really beautiful. All of these have been fun. What a creative idea!

Author's Response: No problem about not reviewing, I'm just glad you have enjoyed them! I really appreciate what you said. I always kind of thought that waiting was a huge part of Jim's storyline-- somehow, I related it to waitressing, and thus the idea was born, haha. Thank you so much for reading!

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