10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2008 12:14 am Title: Friday
loved that you deviated from the normal "jim to the rescue" plot in this. i'm pretty sure this is where S4 would have taken us. you know, if the AMPTP would grow up already.
Author's Response: thank you! I am definitely brainstorming a few ideas where Pam does a little bit more "rescuing" Jim because I don't think one blow out is really going to do the trick. thanks for the review :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2008 09:20 pm Title: Friday
I really liked this. The whole Second Life thing got me thinking of where they would take it on the show-- but unfortunately we never got to see :P This was a nice take on the whole situation, and I really loved how you portrayed Jim-- esp. with the guitar and all :)
Well done !
Author's Response: thanks so much! I really am anal about trying to nail the characters as best as I possibly can and it means a lot to me that that came across! :)
Date: January 09, 2008 01:25 pm Title: Friday
You did a fabulous job characterizing Jim's many insecurities with both himself and his relationship with Pam. I hope you'll consider extending this story. There are so many directions you could take both Jim and Pam with the new level of honesty you've created between them. Like Becky215, I was hoping season 4 would further explore the changing dynamic between FNB and Jim. We'll have to live vicariously through your story!
Thanks so much for reading The Jim Paradox! :-) The shout out is appreciated!
Author's Response: no, YOU have done an amazing job characterizing Jim's many insecurities and reading your in depth analysis of both he and Pam is just, like ... wow. I mean, damn. I never would have looked that deep into it if it weren't for you, and now I can't help myself! haha. I really was hoping Season 4 would explore these issues further as well, all the bumps and bruises of forging a new relationship with so many high expectations already set. Alas, that is what fanfic must be for in this day of greedy studio heads. rnrnAnyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, it means so much!
10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2008 12:09 pm Title: Friday
interesting new perspective on their relationship - looking forward to more!
Author's Response: thanks a bunch moxie that means a lot. i'm surprised by the requests for more, I will definitely take it into consideration. just need the right inspiration. i'm brainstorming, maybe another part or two is possible. anyway thank you for reading!! :)