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Reviewer: epiphilly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2008 04:32 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh goodness! I love all this angst. You're doing a wonderful job. I am practically screaming in my head for those two to work it out, which i assure you is a testiment to your talented writing. I can't wait for the continuation, please update soon!

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2008 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

The idea that Roy was abusing Pam actually makes a lot of sense - her behaviour screams it. I thought you made it totally believable while retaining her innate "Pamness".. Awesome writing. Can't wait to see where you're going with it.

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