10 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2012 07:55 am Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe this is where the story ended! i knew it was unfinished, but argh! Right when Jim would have picked her up, seen that Roy was abusive, and finally found out that was why Pam said "I can't". Not that Pam didn't love him or didn't want to, but she *could not" break up with Roy.
I didn't need to see them resolve everything, I was just hoping to see Jim's pain when he made the realization. :)
I was very happy that it was Jim she called and she stuck with her request for a ride even though it was awkward with karen being in the background.
Thanks for writing and sharing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2009 08:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Right now my heart actually hurts from reading this. It's the worst feeling in th world, but you have to fix this!!!! Please, please, please finish this. This has to give Pam the happy ending she deserves. Even though I hate Jim for how horrible he has been to her, I know he still loves her. Please make this right. I can't take a story that ends with poor Pam being beaten up by ass Roy. :(
Date: July 29, 2008 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Now that you're done with your other story, PLEASE finish this one. It's really, really good!
Date: July 08, 2008 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg this needs to be finished. wow. pretty please?
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see how Jim reacts when he picks Pam up. Please update soon.
Date: March 08, 2008 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like this story and i thought this chapter was wonderful. Pam's turmoil is heartbreaking, and i think you write her incredibly well. I hope you're not being too hard on yourself because I really do enjoy this story. I'm sure you can lead this story to where you want it to go. Please don't give up on it. You are writing beautifully. I hope to read more : )