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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 03:05 pm Title: Sweet Nothings

Wow.  Jim is a wooer extraordinaire! (More French!)

I just love the second e-card:

‘We kiss and the world disappears’

Her hand shook slightly as she clicked to open it. Inside he’d written:

‘It does, you know. Everytime. Have lunch with me.’

Reviewer: shootingstars Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 11:37 am Title: Sweet Nothings

She then spent the next five minutes staring at her monitor until she remembered what it was for.

That is a brilliant end to a wonderful chapter. I like this story because I love the idea of their relationship developing within the old framework of teasing each other. Also, Jim is adorable.

By the way, you might want to alter your summary - it still reads that part 3 is up so even though it's at the top of the 'new list' some people might not notice it's been updated.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 06:41 am Title: Sweet Nothings

That was so hot! I want a Jim! A wooing!Jim, to be exact!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 06:15 am Title: Sweet Nothings

I'm surprised Pam could walk out of the elevator.  That is one lethal superpower.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 05:43 am Title: Sweet Nothings

I'm grinning.  So cute...and sexym, too!   “Did you know,” he whispered as they walked slowly towards Dunder Miflin’s door. “That when I kiss you full on the lips, they turn the most beautiful shade of pink?"  Nice.

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