Date: April 21, 2008 01:42 pm Title: Season One
Wow!
...see I can be minimal too...
Date: April 10, 2008 11:43 am Title: Season One
WOW! Thank you so much for this little glimpse into Pam's mind. I really hope you try again with Jim's POV.
Date: April 10, 2008 10:25 am Title: Season One
Thank you so much for these little gems...they've been great and let's have fun at the party!
Date: April 09, 2008 09:38 am Title: Season One
I am so excited to hear you may countinue this with Jim's POV. I can't believe how perfect you were in each episode. Happy to finally have the sadness over!
Date: April 06, 2008 08:02 am Title: Season One
4 sentences that also broke my heart. Simply fantastic.
Date: April 05, 2008 01:07 pm Title: Season One
I really love this. Each little tidbit breaks my heart for Pam. You have done a great job.
Date: April 04, 2008 10:47 am Title: Season One
I haven't commented yet but didn't want to wait any longer. I love the short thoughts Pam is having about each episode. You have hit each one right on!
Date: April 02, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Season One
I really love this idea. I didn't, however, like some of the earlier sentences, just because they were so aware of Pam and Jim's Torrid Love (Alliance and Basketball being the worst). A minimalist reading of Pam has to address a transition into those sorts of thoughts. But the one for Hot Girl was really interesting and also my favorite. It's about her and small revelations in smaller moments. (I'm pretty pigeonholed, far as fic goes.) Looking forward to more! And congratulations on posting your first fic- I've been too cowardly to do so yet, and I hope the criticism I offered was friendly enough.
9 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2008 04:53 pm Title: Season One
I like it! Very unique, keep it going!
Date: April 02, 2008 04:40 pm Title: Season One
I think this is lovely. I really appreciate minimalism, mostly because i'm so terrible at it.
welcome to MTT! I can't wait to hear more from you
Date: April 02, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Season One
I'm liking it, it's reminding me of the episodes, mind you in a very PamPOV/ Jam way, but whatever. It'll be cool for the new episode coming up on the 10th. Keep updating it!
Date: April 02, 2008 03:37 pm Title: Season One
Good job you know your Office! Keep it going.
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