8 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2008 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, this wasn't weird at all! I think it was great - especially liked this line:
"With that, he got up, walked out of his interview, dumped the girl who was distracting him from his future, and drove home to Scranton."
PS Don't forget to add the MTT disclaimer to your stories... keeps us all out of trouble! I've added it here for you.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm still getting the hang of things around here. I'll be sure to add that to my other stories. Thanks for the review!
Date: April 14, 2008 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! =)
Date: April 09, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am glad you were bored. Because I enjoyed reading it while I was bored. Great Story. Short, simply and sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! Luckily I get bored a lot....
Date: April 09, 2008 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1
it's not weird. it's precious. i think it's cool to think about how Jim might answer that same question in a different situation in the future!
Date: April 09, 2008 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Not weird -- nice. Good job.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was cute! I liked the multiple time shifts, you pulled it off well.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. Even made me tear up a little. Nevermind that I'm already a hormonal bat. It was very original and well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: April 08, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not weird at all. I'd call it lovely. I hope you get bored more often.
Author's Response: Lucky for you, I get bored A LOT. Thanks for the review! :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think that was super cute. :)