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Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2008 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so touching, it gave me goosebumps.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2008 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting.  The story is good, and the "in love"/"love" paragraph is interesting.  I'm not sure I agree with it entirely, because I do think it was love before, but it's interesting.

Nice job. 



Author's Response: You know, I wasn't so sure about that paragraph either. It took me forever to get that part to sound like I wanted it to. I know it may have been love before, but the point I wanted to make was that it's different now than it was before. I know that's obvious, but coming from a love perspective, it's completely different. Thanks for the review!

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