10 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2009 03:02 pm Title: You're Beautiful
I LOVED IT! fantastic story!
Date: May 03, 2008 08:30 am Title: You're Beautiful
oh wow...just read it all...loved it all..loved when she told him she wasn't beautiful and he told her to never say it again...can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 08:25 pm Title: You're Beautiful
My gosh, I am so honored that you even noticed my suggestion! You're getting reviews on every chapter from now on, so good job ;D.
Anyway, this chapter is so well done! There are a lot of fics about Pam letting her hair down and Jim telling her she's beautiful and generally being the best guy on the face of the Earth, but your interpretation seems special to me. I think that you especially hit the nail on the head when Pam said, "Stop. I’m not…beautiful. Pretty, yes, but not beautiful." I know that I feel that way, and plenty of other people do too. And Jim's speech is just too perfect. I don't know whether to be hopeful that there are men like that out there, or cry because Jim isn't real (blasphemy, I know). Anyhoo, great, great job, as usual.
Author's Response: Oh, Jamgela, I think you're beautiful and I don't even know you! Sometimes you can just tell. rnrnThere are still some men left out there that are like our fictional Jim, but I sure don't know where to find them...if you figure it out, please tell them to give me a ring. Yes, you read that right. rnrnAnd yes, I read all the reviews, and I love them ALL...why do you think I'm practically begging for them?
8 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 12:15 pm Title: You're Beautiful
Great chapter, I read Jamgela's review and totally agree with her. More would be great. I will also do my best to continue to review, cuz I don't want you to stop with this either!
Date: May 02, 2008 07:55 am Title: You're Beautiful
Really glad that you added this chapter!!! So cute and makes me love Jim even more!