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Reviewer: kerber1920 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 06:53 am Title: Chapter 1

This story was awesome and so JAM from beginning to end -- bravo! :) Enjoyed it very much!

Author's Response: Thank you! Let's hope they give us what we want in the finale.

Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 06:47 am Title: Chapter 4

Consider me thoroughly kicked as well!! I like how you had her break. A lot of others are doing it too, but somehow not as effective or realistic in my opinion. But how she's waiting and waiting and then asks what's wrong with her that no one wants to marry her is I think more true to Pam. Great job, I've loved it!!!

Author's Response: I have this belief that even gaining confidence doesn't just make all our old fears disappear, so thanks for that, I'm happy it came off as realistic. I wanted to get it posted before last night just in case they decided to kick us all... but after last night's events I gotta wonder just how amazing it's going to be! Thanks for reading and for all your great comments. It really keeps a girl going. :D

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 06:41 am Title: Chapter 4

so amazing...just read it all and i was throughly surprised...

Author's Response: Great! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: WeBrokeHisBrain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 04:02 am Title: Chapter 4

Awwwww! This was so perfect to read after watching Job Fair.

I'll have to leave this chapter open on my boyfriend's computer... although I have a feeling it will be more like "do you want to" "okay"

Author's Response: Well, just having the question asked is pretty cool in and of itself. But a girl can hope for something wildly romantic and sweet, right? :D

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

what an absolutely PERFECT end to a perfect story.  The entire weekend was great and I love how you did give her that insecurity....how could she not feel that with her history.  And then that beautiful set up with the candles...::sigh:: GORGEOUS.  Thank you so much for this story! I hope the Office does it as well!

Author's Response: I'm such a romantic sap. Can't help it. But I like to think Jim probably is too. I hate to say it but part of me hopes that for the sake of reality, we DON'T get to see it on the show, because it seems like he probably wouldn't want cameras around for a moment like that. Anyway thanks so much for all your encouragement and kind words. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

So good!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Pamma Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ok so let's just get this outta the way here.....AWWWWWW!! That was just the sweetest proposal ever! I loved this story, completely fantastic fluff!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: The Temp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

This story has made my day every time you posted a chapter. Great work!

Author's Response: Awwww :D Thanks!

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 4

guh.  I am dead.  i was totally crying through that entire proposal.  You are a master, my friend, beautifully done.  What a great little speech he gave.  Ugh if a man ever called me his inspiriation I would totally lose it, that is so great.  Ok enough gushing ;-)  Did I mention this was great?  It was great. Totally just...great.

Author's Response: Wow! No, keep gushing! It's so great to hear! :D Thanks for all that! I'm glad you liked it. Not too fluffy? Well, of course it was, but hey, these kids deserve something sweet. We should all be SOME man's inspiration... thanks for reading and all the kind words. You're one of my favorite writers on here :D

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 4

LOVE it.

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Mirielle Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

Thank you sooo much for allowing Jim and Pam to get engaged in the lovely Finger Lakes... it's where I'm from and have lived my whole life

Lovely, romantic setting for a lovely couple!

Author's Response: Well, I only know it from pictures, but it seems really beautiful...glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh, callisto.  Seriously? Awesome.  Definitely how this should go down, even if we can't see it. Until proven otherwise, this is how they get engaged in my book.  So romantic and adorable! Awesome blossom, with extra awesome.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a sentimental romantic sap but I like to think Halpert is too. I hope they knock our socks off.

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

wonderful proposal and story

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh my gosh!
this was ABSOLUTELY gorgeous!
you had me smiling the entire time, you've got the characters perfectly and this is exactly the kind of way i want them to get engaged!
INCREDIBLE job!

Author's Response: :D Thanks! I've had so much fun writing this story. It's great to see so many people enjoying it. I have to go back to working on my other one now, Vampiric Blood is demanding more chapters. I can't wait to see what they do with our kids, though. They deserve to be happy so the rest of us can live vicariously through their bliss, right??

Reviewer: Sunday Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

awww, that was so perfect!! i love when jim says, "you were so pissed." ahahaha, she really was. and i would've been too! i swear, if they don't do this soon. i just don't even know what i'll do.

actually, nothing is what i'll do. but anyway, i loved this story! :]

Author's Response: :D I know exactly how you feel..but take heart, season finale is an hour long. I can't think they'll let it fester through the summer!

Reviewer: Jordon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

This and the Job Fair that just finished airing have led to me just generally *flailing* in happiness. Fantastic chapter, great ending, perfect story. God, I'm a total wreck right now. 

Author's Response: That was such a sweet episode tonight. About time things started to go right for our boy. Thanks for all the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed my story!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

YAY!  Thank Greg that callisto gives us the ass-kicking we need!  I am getting so ANTSY, I know just how Pam feels!  Nicely kicked.

Author's Response: :D I sure hope they do it in the finale. If we have to wait all summer... grr. Thanks for sticking with my story lisahoo!!

Reviewer: SocrBritney Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1

i absolutely remember MST 3000. I own all the volumes, in fact.

loved it. it was really funny to read drunk jim. i bet it was even more fun to write it.

Author's Response: You know it :D And once again, I'm gratified to see how many MST3K fans are out there! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 10:31 am Title: Chapter 3

This is such a fun and sweet story.  I like that you filled in some of the blanks from the show.  I can't wait to read more. :)


Author's Response: Thanks Morning Angel! It's done now...hope i did it justice.

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2008 08:16 am Title: Chapter 3

OMG, Callisto - this is superb! You are getting even better at writing Jim and Pam, I think. I was thrilled to see a new chapter posted! The detail of the day they met is amazing and I can see Pam making up her engagement to hide what she felt for Jim. I was loving this chapter and then when I read this:

Jim looked me in the eye and said very deliberately, “Oh, I wouldn’t bother with that.”

...I almost choked on my raisin toast. I cannot wait to see what you post next!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have had so much fun writing this story. I hope you enjoy how i wrapped it up!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

“You forgot the beet farm.”

“Only after weeks of therapy."

^One of the best fanfic quotes ever. You have totally captured J&P. Can't wait until the ass-kicking! Write write write!

Author's Response: Thanks :D It's so hard to do justice to their brand of banter but it sure is fun trying. hard at work on the end of this little journey...maybe i'll get it finished by tomorrow night??

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ahhh that end part with Mr. Langely was so funny. I'm loving this! Reading on...

P.S., Author responses are loved as much by readers as reviews are loved by the authors. ;)

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 3

This story is very cute and I can imagine Jim and Pam acting this way. I like seeing into Pam's thoughts and understanding how frustrated she is. It's very funny.

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

So cute!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: second drink Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2008 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

I wish I had reviewed this story earlier. I'm really enjoying this. It's believable, warm, and funny all in one package, and I love how you integrate actual episodes into the story and fill in the unseen bits. I really enjoyed Jim and Pam's flashbacks of the day they met. I can see Pam feeling an immediate attraction to Jim, but lying about her engagement. Great Job!

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