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Wow, now that was a debut.  Outstanding work.  Perfect voices and charactrization, very smooth writing with no bells and whistles.  My favorites were Jim's worrying and Pam's despair at her possibly always being a receptionist, but really everything in the whole fic rang true. 

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I figured Jim would be a worrier, constantly worrying about Pam. I was nervous about getting their voices, because I love the characters so much. I'm so glad you liked it!