9 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2008 10:08 am Title: Ryan's Revenge
"This girl was obviously in love with him" Just that one girl? I think most females watching the show were in love with him at that point.
That's the spinoff right there. Prision Mates - Ryan and Jim Together Again.
Author's Response: Haha, I didn't think of it. It could be a really bad Odd Couple-type sitcom.
Date: May 27, 2008 09:00 am Title: Ryan's Revenge
I didn't realize I had missed a chapter of this!
I love that Andy is frustrated because the big moment he had planned was ruined. Hah.
Author's Response: Serves him right, doesn't it? I'm glad you like these! Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2008 01:22 am Title: Ryan's Revenge
ohhhh Ryan.... Totally plausible which is scary!
Author's Response: Very scary! Thanks for the review.
9 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2008 11:28 pm Title: Ryan's Revenge
I bet Roy will be in one of these...
"'Don't worry, Jim! I'll be right behind you. I'm gonna bail you out!' Pam said, following them to the police car."
Lol, that sounds like a line from a bad movie. These are rather entertaining. If you keep writing, I will keep reading!
Author's Response:
Actually, I don't have a Roy chapter in here. I definitely thought about including him, but I didn't like any of the ideas I came up with.
I'm glad you like this. Thanks for the review!