Date: May 27, 2008 04:39 am Title: Toxic
AHHH! My worst nightmare!
Well played, sir.
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 04:10 am Title: Toxic
You, my friend, are the devil! Genius.
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2008 01:22 am Title: Ryan's Revenge
ohhhh Ryan.... Totally plausible which is scary!
Author's Response: Very scary! Thanks for the review.
9 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2008 11:28 pm Title: Ryan's Revenge
I bet Roy will be in one of these...
"'Don't worry, Jim! I'll be right behind you. I'm gonna bail you out!' Pam said, following them to the police car."
Lol, that sounds like a line from a bad movie. These are rather entertaining. If you keep writing, I will keep reading!
Author's Response:
Actually, I don't have a Roy chapter in here. I definitely thought about including him, but I didn't like any of the ideas I came up with.
I'm glad you like this. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2008 11:25 pm Title: The Asp Strikes Again
Oh my God! This was more entertaining than painful, because I know it would never actually happen on the show. Very interesting. Is Roy going to make an appearance in the next one? Reading on...
8 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2008 11:23 pm Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
Ah! That was awful! And horrible! And... Ah! How dare you make me think such thoughts! xD But you certainly did accomplish your goal. Badfic!
Date: May 22, 2008 10:25 pm Title: The Asp Strikes Again
Jaw is still dropped. :)
Author's Response: Heh. Thanks for the review.
Date: May 22, 2008 12:28 pm Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
This story is hysterical. I cannot, cannot, cannot wait to see what the ultimate horrible fate is at the end, and the running gag of Andy looking for Angela cracks me up.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! The horrible fate is pretty bad. I can't wait to post it! :)
Date: May 22, 2008 10:29 am Title: The Asp Strikes Again
These were so bad...they made me feel good about how the season finale ended.
Nice writing! How about a happy one this time?
Author's Response: Sorry, no happy ones allowed in this story. :)
Date: May 22, 2008 06:51 am Title: The Asp Strikes Again
Oh, Larry! Such an incredibly BAD idea that it's just perfect. Andy's lines are excellent! Thanks for the good laugh and a bit more perspective on how much worse it could have been!
Author's Response: Thanks, sweetpea! I'm glad you like the Andy stuff, too. Hope you like the rest of the chapters. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 21, 2008 07:19 pm Title: The Asp Strikes Again
so why would you put me through it twice?!?!?! luke and now jim?!!
so mean!!!
:P
Author's Response: Ha! Just be thankful it will never be filmed. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 21, 2008 06:17 pm Title: The Asp Strikes Again
Ha! Yep, this would have been worse. ;)
Also, to truly parallel Gilmore Girls, Jim will have to try to keep his time with Sadie totally separate from his time with Pam, and Pam will have to uncharacteristically step back and give him way, way, waaaaay too much space and time.
Oh, and Pam needs to give him an ultimatum, an almost certain relationship-buster. ;)
At least this is just fanfic; no one chose to film this, so you're way ahead of Gilmore Girls where someone inexplicably did.
Author's Response:
I don't think I have the heart to write out all the horrible details. That's why I'm keeping these short and to the point. I'm just glad we won't ever have to see it.
Thanks for the review!
Date: May 21, 2008 06:03 pm Title: The Asp Strikes Again
You are awesome. These make me laugh. Definately puts the finale in perspective! Also, kudos to the Gilmore Girls shout out. That was the worst.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review!
Date: May 21, 2008 05:58 pm Title: The Asp Strikes Again
As I am a Gilmore Girls fan I would be very angry if this happened, because the way it happened on Gilmore Girls tore the show apart, just thinking about it...ugh.
But I do love Andy :)
Author's Response: Yeah it was pretty awful to live through, wasn't it? Thanks for the review!
Date: May 20, 2008 10:38 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
Wow. Just. Wow.
Not sure which was more disturbing though, this chapter, or TLK's comments. ::smort::
Nice job, Dork. :-D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, dork! I've got much worse than this coming up!
Date: May 20, 2008 07:35 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
Oh Karen. That WOULD have been worse.
I love that Andy tells him that Angela has friends with hot bods. That's pretty much the best thing ever.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2008 05:49 pm Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
Oh, this is so awesomely necessary. I'm quite sure I'll be sitting here all night thinking up completely ridiculous scenarios just like this one. I cannot wait for the following chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've got some pretty bad stuff on the way.
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2008 04:54 pm Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
please update!
Author's Response: The next one should be coming shortly. (TWSS).
Date: May 19, 2008 08:00 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
Great idea, larrymcg. There's no better way to raise optimism or spirits, than to show us all the ways the SF could've been so much worse. Now, I'm so damned relieved Karen didn't return that the SF looks downright peachy to me. Loved Andy's wondering where Angela was at the end. Just a nice little addition that injected some typically funny Andy-cism into an otherwise depressing situation. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Cricket. I think you'll be even more relieved when you see the future chapters. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 19, 2008 07:09 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
this makes me feel better
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad. Thanks for the review!
Date: May 19, 2008 06:28 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
You are right! It could have been WAY worse!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: May 19, 2008 05:47 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
Ha! Are there more chapters, then? Each with increasingly bad results?
Someone could go through the elevator doors and fall to their death, a la LA Law. It would have to be one of the most beloved characters, so...not Toby. ;)
Or, Jim could have proposed, Pam could have said "Okay," and then Ryan could have walked in on Jim and Karen having sex in the office. That would be worse than...anything, really.
Is this "it could have been worse" therapy helpful to the broken JAM heart? I'm taking the "I'm determined not to give a crap about JAM" stance. We'll see how that goes.
Thanks for the story. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Kev!
I hope this helps us be relieved that we didn't get worse than we got! Your ideas are pretty good, but at least one of mine is much worse than either of them! That's probably the one I'll finish with.
Date: May 19, 2008 04:54 am Title: She's Baaaaaaaack
So, killing off the entire office one by one wasn't enough for you? I guess you've been taking correspondence classes at the Greg Daniels school of sadism, huh?
(That is a compliment, I think. You, grief bone pounder, you. That sounds really dirty. Oops.)
Author's Response: Definite TWSS there! Thanks for the review!