10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 05:40 pm Title: The Cold Open
holy crap! that was completely in character! WOW!!! i LOVED every bit of it!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you found it in character Dwangie, and thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: July 01, 2008 11:03 am Title: The Cold Open
All right, I had a piece of ice in my mouth when I read this line: "Did you find the right medicine for Jan’s vagina?" ...And let me tell you, I came dangerously close to choking on it. So hilarious (and my god, I can so hear Dwight asking that....)
I've got to tell you, reading this was an absolute treat -- it's pitch perfect (both in terms of characterization as well as tone; you've even got those perfect pauses in there). Just love it!
On to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I should start by saying that all of your reviews are absolutely awesome, so thanks!
I'm glad that you liked that line from Dwight. I went back and forth on it many times, because while I felt its bluntness wouldn't be out of character for him, I also thought that maybe it was a little too-over-the-top. I think it ends up working, especially when paired with Michael's reaction. Thank you again for this review, girl7.
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2008 01:18 pm Title: The Cold Open
I LOVE it. please, please, PLEASE update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm about to post the last chapter, so while it took longer than I hoped, it's done now! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing BuffyFreak7, I appreciate it.
Date: June 04, 2008 09:02 pm Title: The Cold Open
Ok, you should officially move to Hollywood and write for the show. Also, don't worry about being a slow writer. I'm a pretty slow writer myself. It once took me several months to write a 55-word fic. True story (note: this story is not true).
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for the kind words, that's very nice of you. I am a tragically slow writer, which is unfortunate because I know people lose interest in my stories because I update so infrequently, but what can I do? Thanks for taking the time to review RomanCandle, I appreciate it.
Date: June 04, 2008 05:36 pm Title: The Cold Open
LOVED IT!!! Can't wait for more. please right more soon!!!!
Author's Response: Well, I'm posting ACT TWO in just a minute, so that is really good timing for a request! Thanks for the compliment and taking the time to review BuffyFreak7.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 06:30 pm Title: The Cold Open
lol loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it ireallylovetheoffice, and thank you for taking the time to review.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 03:13 pm Title: The Cold Open
I've said it before, but you really have a knack for the rhythm of the show. Keep it up, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I really appreciate your compliment Wendy Blue, and thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: May 30, 2008 08:54 am Title: The Cold Open
"I'm feral" :D:D Act One please!
Author's Response: Act One is coming, I promise! I'm glad that you liked the line about Dwight being feral , and thanks for taking the time to review untherapy, it's awesome that you did!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 10:59 am Title: The Cold Open
Yay, new script fic by my favorite author! I really enjoy your writing (clearly), and this style makes it feel like we broke into the set in Palo Alto or wherever they film the Office and stole into the writers room. Awesome stuff.
Author's Response: Wow, what a nice review, thank you so much Jordon. I always appreciate reviews from you, they're so nice. I'm glad that you've liked it so far, and hopefully you'll continue to as I work on it.
Date: May 28, 2008 04:00 am Title: The Cold Open
"My pheromones are overpoweringly strong at the moment.
(looks directly into camera)
I’m feral."
You have no idea how much that line grossed me out lmao! Especially since that sounds SO much like something Dwight would say!
OK the is only exactly like the show! It's hilarious! You really are one of the best (fake) Office writers lol. Update! REALLY soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad that that line grossed you out, it was definitely my intention for people's reaction to be sort of "ewww" to that. I appreciate you taking the time to review Snoznoodle.
8 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 06:19 pm Title: The Cold Open
I’m feral. Funniest line ever! I have a feeling I'm going to like this--it feels real.
Author's Response: I'm glad that it feels real, I went back and forth on Dwight's "vagina" line because you'd probably not see that in an episode, but oh well, I liked it. Thank you for the kind words, and taking the time to review NanReg.
Date: May 27, 2008 06:07 pm Title: The Cold Open
liked the start...kinda weird formatting, but if you stick to it it will work...can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Yes, the formatting can be a little tricky with script-fic. It's definitely different than normals fics, so it can get confusing or just different I guess. But thanks for the kind words and taking the time to review dancer288, I appreciate it.
Date: May 27, 2008 06:02 pm Title: The Cold Open
Gosh this is just like a real episode! I really want to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad that you liked it, and that it felt real to you. Thats a really nice compliment. Thank you for taking the time to review dentalhydraplostion, I really appreciate it.
Date: May 27, 2008 05:11 pm Title: The Cold Open
Really funny and gross. I can totally see this being a cold open for the show. I am writting my own post season 4 fic. I'd love to hear your feed back on mine: After the fireworks. Keep it up I'd love to read more.
Author's Response: I'll definitely check out your story, Jewelsy. I haven't had a chance to read too much fic lately, (thus my little disclaimer). Thank you for the kind words and taking the time to review, I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 04:59 pm Title: The Cold Open
Haha, this was great! Really love the way you write script-fic too, and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much oobadnama! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and continue to enjoy what's to come. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: May 27, 2008 04:05 pm Title: The Cold Open
You write amazing script-fic. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time to review. I do enjoy doing script-fic, even though I know its not that popular a format to do writing on. Thanks again, Wendy Blue.