1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2022 07:03 am Title: Act Three
This is canon-quality cringe humor.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 06:26 pm Title: Act Three
this is incredible! it is as if i am reading an actual screenplay from the writers of the office! WOWWWWW!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice words and the review Dwangie!
Date: July 01, 2008 11:40 am Title: Act Three
I just want to throw confetti or something; this is so damn good! Loved the confusion about Jim & Pam getting engaged, and Andy's lowered voice, "Is there a Little Tuna on the way?" literally made me laugh right out loud.
I loved the callback to "Hot Girl," with the whole, "We're just dating" comment, and that Jim bristled at that. (Also, everyone's excitement/confusion over the Jim/Pam pregnancy reminded me of the Afghanastannanies bit from CN -- hilarious.)
Your Creed is gold -- just gold. :o)
While I am so sorry to see that this was the last chapter, I'll definitely be waiting for updates to this one -- I feel like I've just watched an episode! Just outstanding work, dundiefromgod!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the "Little Tuna" line, that was my favorite line of this chapter. Also, you're right-on with the idea that the scene is supposed to mirror the bit from CN. Aside from like, Jim and Pam, my favorite scenes in TO are ensemble ones with quick dialogue and usually some confusion, which I employed in Act One as well. Also, I always in my stories try to have one Creed TH, with he says something strange, like in the show. Thanks again for the awesome reviews girl7, I appreciate you taking the time to give me such wonderful feedback.
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2008 10:16 am Title: Act Three
Oh, this was really good! I don't often read script format, but I was very pleasantly surprised by this story. Do update soon! :)
Author's Response: I know that script format isn't a very popular style of Fic, but I think its something different to try and write, and certainly to read. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review 823freckles, I appreciate it.