Date: July 18, 2008 10:33 am Title: Chapter 5
Great Job Jinxcoke. I think the way you engineer the twists and turns in this story is believably done and I can't wait for more. Update soon...and sorry I was a late with the beta help!
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10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
I have to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. I love the role reversal and how we see Pam eating her heart out over Jim. Really, I want to see this series last for a long, long time. I'm enjoying your take on their relationship a lot. I can't articulate it very well but it has a gentleness and sweetness to it and want it to continue for as many chapters as you have in you.
Jim coming to the realization that he's falling for Pam and that's she more than just his friend is something that I can't wait to read but I don't want it to come too fast. Are you seeing a trend here? lol
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your awesome review! It was so nice! It really makes me happy that people are liking this story! Thanks again! I really appreciate it!
Date: July 14, 2008 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Interesting twist on The Dundies. I'm liking the way your story is shaping up!
BTW, I think you've got an unfinished paragraph hanging in the middle there:
His tone was light and she could tell he was joking, but there was a slight, almost sad look in his eyes. She lifted up her mug and said, “Well here’s to being unoriginal.” Pam then quickly
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! I don't know how that happened! rnrnThanks for the review! I am glad that you are liking the story!
Date: July 13, 2008 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was awesome! I always wanted Jim to drive Pam home from the Dundies and shifting the kiss to a goodnight kiss was lovely.
Can't wait to hear more about Lauren (and how crazy she is for not wanting to spend time with Jim!)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I am so glad you liked it!
Date: July 13, 2008 02:00 am Title: Chapter 5
oooh it's lovely. Lovely awards. and it's the little things, you know? Like her watching the tapes of award shows of the past. Just love!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Next chapter should be up soon!
Date: July 12, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
The Dunders? Great chapter, I can't wait until we see this Lauren, whose insane, obviously. And the kissing Jim on her door step Pam...Love her!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Yes...Lauren might be a tad bit insanse...I mean who leaves Jim alone...anywhere?