Date: June 03, 2010 06:09 pm Title: Cold Open and Act I
This was very sweet. It's a crime that we didn't get to see the Beeslys meet Jim - one of the many squandered opportunities of seasons 4 and 5. And I liked the structure and pacing: e.g., dropping Stanley's unexpected praise for Jim in the middle of the chaos of Act III. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, I haven't read this script is a long time .I need to go over it again, although I probably won't like it now... lol... Thanks again!
Date: June 05, 2008 11:37 am Title: Cold Open and Act I
This is great! I was laughing out loud so hard! Please continue!
Author's Response: Will do! Thanks!
Date: June 04, 2008 12:09 pm Title: Cold Open and Act I
Niiice. Can I just say that your Michael moments are spot-on?? Your writing is truly funny, and I find myself actually mixing up scenes you have so vividly described, with the real show. Why aren't you an actual writer on the show???
Author's Response: Boy... from your lips to Greg Daniel's ears.. lol.. thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 11:25 am Title: Cold Open and Act I
Good start, Kevin! AU or not, I'm enjoying it very much--especially the emotion. I'm really glad you didn't cut back on it. In fact, overage fangirl that I am, this gave me butterflies: I… probably shouldn’t have said that. Lately Pam has been a little…withdrawn. And I have been all full throttle, like a dope, telling her all I’m feeling. Which is… a lot. (pause) I hope I’m not scaring her. I just want to make sure… she feels the same way. (looks down) I hope she does.
Makes me think that, considering he bought her a ring one week into the relationship, he probably was feeling this way. More soon, please!
Author's Response: Thank, Nan! I probably would not have changed that bit with Jim, I've always kinda liked that. I definitely wanted to show how serious he is about Pam. Thanks again!