Reviews For Time of War
You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: untherapy Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 04:50 am Title: Chapter 2

wow :P I think Dwight would have truly loved fighting in the Civil war. I'd be happy to beta-read for you if you like - I really love old stories like this and I know how hard it can be to write in that style without over-doing it and sounding stilted... Just let me know!

Author's Response: That's awesome thank you!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is brilliant.  You have captured the essence of modern Jim and Pam in James and Pamela.

Oh, and Salted-Beef fingers?  LOL!!

I'm adding this to my favourites.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Awesome thanks! :)

I'm so glad people are liking these. They're fun to create and I'm learning all sorts of things with the research i.e. salted-beef, it's an epidemic.

Reviewer: dentalhydraplostion Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

What an interesting JAM story, must say that I have not see anything like this before but it is very entertaining! Love to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I like to do things a little differently sometimes so I thought I'd see what I could do with this. Glad you liked it. :)

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans