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Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2008 01:05 pm Title: It's sixteen miles to the promised land

How about more? That could save you.

Reviewer: MuteytheMailman Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2008 12:35 pm Title: It's sixteen miles to the promised land

Funny! Of all the scenarios with the two of them, drunk and married in Vegas was not one I imagined. Like it!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2008 12:32 pm Title: It's sixteen miles to the promised land

Now that was an unusual shower scene!  I loved it.  But Jim's a little dense, don't you think, not catching Pam's "If that's what you want" comment.  Hope he develops a wee bit of awareness by the next chapter!  Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I totally agree. Which is why I totally took it out. I wanted Jim to not be picking up on Pam's hints, but that wasn't very subtle and Jim's not that stupid. Thanks for pointing it out!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2008 12:31 pm Title: It's sixteen miles to the promised land

Nice! I was smiling the whole time. What a great premise. It is very funny, witty and filled w/ great sarcasm. I especially loved Josh hitting on Pam, and the universe playing a "joke" on Jim. I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: stardust0607 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2008 08:40 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Omgomgomg!! They're freakin married!!! Yesssss

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 09:06 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Oh. My. God.

I need to read more of this story, like, immediately. You can probably tell that I'm very intrigued.

Reviewer: Feedingmyaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 07:17 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Oh! I can't wait to see Josh's reaction... especially if he's hitting on Pam when he finds out!!!!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 05:27 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Dude! You must write more!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

I think you win the prize for fastest trip to the altar!  Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 04:27 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Hah, nice concept.  Can't wait to see this continued!

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 01:20 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

..Interesting. Very, very interesting. I can't wait to read more of this, teeheee.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 10:38 am Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

*Big smile* I was hoping...and you delivered.  I'm such a sap.  More, please.

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 08:40 am Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: untherapy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 05:01 am Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

:P It's like Friends! i think Jim and Pam should get drunk and married in many more fics. They need to just get in the right place and then figure everything out ;-)

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 11:44 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Awesome! This was just great. I hope we have more coming out or way soon.

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 10:50 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

Excellent! Looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Some days, they last longer than others.

I love this idea! Can't wait until you update again!

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