Date: June 16, 2009 08:55 pm Title: Consequences
loved the friends reference =] another classic friends to more relationship with monica and chandler
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you got--and appreciated--the reference. :)
Date: February 17, 2009 05:02 pm Title: Consequences
I'm still reading but have got tosay I love it so far. In a story as structured as this one the details of how they spent their night together really have no place. So I just had to say great story and good decision to leave out the first night smut. Really isnt it a little bit hotter that way anyway?
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you support my choice to leave the first night smut out. I don't write particularly good smut anyway (I get too embarrassed), so it's probably just better if people make up their own ideas about what happened that night. ;) Hope you enjoy the rest of it!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2008 10:18 pm Title: Consequences
Friends? and omg Roy is scary :(
I love Pam's. he broke your flowers, it melted my heart :)
Author's Response: Correct! And thank you, I'm glad you thought it was a touching scene at the end. :)
Date: August 09, 2008 01:14 pm Title: Consequences
I'm loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Glad you're enjoying it!!
9 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2008 08:23 pm Title: Consequences
I like how you got Pam to end it right away with Roy...and seriously how clueless Roy is not even suspecting Jim when he was right there in the apartment.
I enjoyed your fade to black after the last chapter and how you got Jim and Pam to interact after their night together. Believable dialogue not sappy at all.
There's a really great flow to your story. As always, loving it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I said this in another review response, but I'll say it here too cause it bears repeating: in my mind, Roy thinks that Pam's whole lifestyle is just an act and she isn't really good enough to be able to get a "celebrity" like Jim. And because of this, he thinks it's totally innocent between them, and even thinks maybe Jim's taking pity on her? I know I've never explicitly said any of this, but that's my backstory and I'm stickin to it!rnrnI'm really glad you think the dialogue is believable and the flow is good. I struggled with this chapter to get it just right, and it sounds like it paid off! Thanks so much again for the review!!
Date: August 08, 2008 05:07 pm Title: Consequences
It's the line about effectively ruining our friendship...from Friends...when Monica and Chandler hook up in London. Do I get my cool points now!?!? Nice chapter BTW. I really liked it! :)
Author's Response: You definitely got your cool points!! Nice job! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!
Date: August 08, 2008 03:05 pm Title: Consequences
Well, considering I watch those DVDs just as much as I watch The Office... and that I could hold conversations just quoting those two shows... yeah, I kind of could totally see it. I still love it though. And it really works.
Anyways, I've been waitin impatiently to read this story and see how you took my suggestions. It works wonderfully. Some small differences but I think it just works and makes me smile and laugh.
And I gave up on quoting my favorite lines. Cause my stomach is growing. but I don't have a Jim to eat with. I do have a cute puppy, so that works.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, your suggestions definitely helped me find what I was really trying to say, and I really appreciate you helping me figure all of it out. And cute puppies are definitely almost as good a Jim. ;) Thanks so much again!!!
Date: August 08, 2008 01:24 pm Title: Consequences
no cool points for me:(
Author's Response: That's okay, you get cool points anyway, because you reviewed. ;) Thanks so much!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2008 08:48 am Title: Consequences
This is definitely my favorite story right now, I hope you post a new chapter soon!
:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!!! And don't worry, this is the last time I go that long between updates!!
Date: August 08, 2008 08:07 am Title: Consequences
What a lovely new chapter, I was going to email you today and bug you about it, hope your vacation was nice. Looking forward to more. Loved the Bunny Slippers? Would laugh forever if I ever seen someone in actual Bunny Slippers, and my favorite of the chapter:
“Shh,” he whispered. “This is a dream, Pam. And if I open my eyes you’re going to disappear.”
*sigh*
Author's Response: Thank you!! My vacation was very nice; busy, but a lot of fun. :D And that line is my favorite too!! It gives me warm fuzzies. I am so glad you liked it, and for their next date I'm thinking about taking them to one of those clubs you mentioned. If you have a preference between TLA and the Troc, I'd love to hear it! Thanks so much again!!!
9 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2008 07:06 am Title: Consequences
Love. This. Story. Happy they're together and not feeling too awkward. SOOO happy she dumped Roy : )
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad she dumped Roy too. Remember in chapter six when they said they would be going to Alma de Cuba "next time"? Yeah, might need your help with the next time. ;) Expect an email from me soon. Thank you so much again!!
Date: August 08, 2008 12:34 am Title: Consequences
I'm totally bananas for this story. I'm trying to think of something constructive to say but I think you got it down pretty freaking great. I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!! I am really glad you're enjoying it. Expect an update soon (sooner than this last update took anyway)!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2008 10:20 pm Title: Consequences
I love this story! I'm usually not a huge fan of AU stories, but you've really captured the characters here. Can't wait for the next chapter.
And is this the reference? “Well, I think it’s safe to say that our friendship is effectively ruined." From Chandler on Friends? If it is excellent reference choice!!
Author's Response: Yaaayyy!!! You win the cool points!! That was the only thing I could think of when trying to write that part, so I just decided to use it. :D I'm so glad you're enjoying this story, and thanks so much for the review!!
Date: August 07, 2008 10:20 pm Title: Consequences
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! I love the fact that there is no angst or regret, and everything is so clean cut. Roy doesn't even think it's Jim! This chapter is so great and the beginning is simply adorable.
And it's killing me but I can't think of the show. Urgh.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you caught that Roy didn't make the connection that "some random guy" may have been Jim. In my mind, Roy thinks Pam could never get a sports hero/celebrity like Jim, which is why he didn't even think of it in the first place. And the reference is from Friends, but I didn't really expect a lot of people to get it. EmilyHalpert is a tad obsessed with Friends anyway. ;) Thanks again!!!
Date: August 07, 2008 10:11 pm Title: Consequences
If I watched any other show than The Office, I might be able to pick up on your hidden reference. Sorry I can't win any cool points.
I'm happy about this update, but hope you don't take so long to update again. A girl can only wait so long!
M
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! You win cool points anyway, because you're a loyal reviewer. ;)rnrnDon't worry, that was way too long to go between updates; last time I'm doing that! Expect another chapter soon!!