10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2008 10:47 pm Title: Next Time
I freaking love this story so much, I just have to shamefully admit I thought this was a baseball team until you mentioned the lakers lmao.
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah the actual sports part is not a strong point, so I can see how you could be misled. It's not too important to understand though. Thanks again!!
9 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 09:25 am Title: Next Time
You do know how to end a chapter. ;) Your Roy is kind of menancing and I'm actually a little worried. Well done! Don't leave us hanging too long...I think my imagination is working a bit overtime. I don't think he'll do what I'm thinking he'll do...so you need to fill in the blanks! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I wouldn't worry too much about Roy; although he does have the potential to do some damage, I don't foresee him doing anything too violent. Glad you liked it, and that you're looking forward to the next chapter!!rn
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 08:31 am Title: Next Time
I'm grinning from ear to ear, DA-S. You're such a sweetie. It's fun being one of your Philly "sources." I sure am relieved that Jim hasn't lost his winning touch! Once again, great job carrying over the little details that we know into this story. And now we have a little drama to look forward to!
Author's Response: No, thank you!! You have been so helpful and loyal in reviewing, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. There will be plenty of drama to come in the next chapter, so be on the lookout for it!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 11:42 pm Title: Next Time
DAS, I'm totally digging this story. Sorry I haven't commented until now, but I absolutely love it! I have to admit, I'm not usually a fan of AU, but this definitely ranks right up there in one of the best ones I've read. The characters are spot-on in their "other" roles. I've been waiting for something dramatic with Roy to happen, so please don't delay the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you were compelled to review; it's always nice hearing from new readers! I know what you mean, I'm not a huge fan of AU either (mostly because a lot of the AU plots are done over and over again), so I'm glad my story is different enough for you to enjoy. Thanks so much again, and look for an update soon!
Date: August 24, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Next Time
Who's blushing, I am....Great chapter and thanks for the shout out. I wish you had a pic of penn's landing at night, it looks so different, that bridge lights up and it's quite the scene. Excellent work my friend.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I know, I wish I could've found a good one at night, but I really like the pic I found. I could easily picture them on that sidewalk sharing a kiss, so I decided that was better than searching high and low for a nighttime one. Thanks so much again, for everything!!!
5 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 08:12 pm Title: Next Time
I love this story so much! I love how you incorporated aspects from the show into the plot but alter them so that they aren't exact. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're catching all of those; it's fun to write about the references we all know and love in different ways. Really glad you enjoyed it; thanks again!!
Date: August 24, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Next Time
Oh, no! Oh, no! Oh, no! Roy's gonna beat the crap out of him. Then Pam will make him all better. Right???
Author's Response: Don't worry! I'm sure whatever happens, Pam will be there. ;) Glad I'm keeping you on the edge of your seat!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 08:02 pm Title: Next Time
Another Awesome Chapter!!!! I Absolutely love the way you did the whole sixers game!!!!! Another awesome chapter for dialogue, and I think you hit Roy's reaction absolutely perfect, espeacially with the warehouse guys!!
I can't wait to see Roy confront Jim next chapter!
Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked the way I handled those two scenes; they gave me the toughest time when I was writing them. Especially the basketball scene, because my knowledge of basketball is not so much. :D Thanks again!!!