10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2008 10:58 pm Title: Bruises and Bandages
Is it wrong I find it hot that Jim is all beaten up? lol.
As always loved it, loved Dwight and Angela and you nailed Michael perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think I got the characterizations correctly; it's something I really try hard at.
Date: September 04, 2008 03:12 pm Title: Bruises and Bandages
Thank you for the update. I'm in need of a happy JAM instead of a broken up JAM. I love Angela and Dwight in this story. It makes me smile just reading about their actions. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh of course! Glad I could fulfill that need, even if I did put Jim in the hospital. :D Glad you're liking Dwight and Angela as well. Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 06:41 am Title: Bruises and Bandages
Oh, the drama! Nice job, as always.
Author's Response: Thanks NanReg! Glad you liked it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 04:30 am Title: Bruises and Bandages
oh, hey, dundie all-star, just stumbled on this story and found it interesting...
bah, i can't keep up this ruse.
you know i love this! angela's simple line about different kind of sin? kinda gave me chills, and whereas i'd usually just laugh at that, i thought it lent gravity to the scene. and for some reason, michael saying "no need for consternation" really made me laugh! and you know i love your callbacks, and dwight's here was no exception. fantabulous, dahling.
(i hope a 10 s a good rating...i'm new at all this.)
Author's Response: LOL you're ridiculous. Thanks for pointing out those two lines. I agree with you about the Angela one; it's funny because it's Angela thinking about sin (along the same lines of "you shouldn't joke about that" in Dinner Party), but it's also serious because Roy's basically beating Jim to a bloody pulp. Kinda one of those, "haha... ohh" moments. And as for Michael's line, "consternation" just always cracks me up, and so basically my only goal for this chapter was to get that line in there somewhere.rnrn10 is VERY good. :D
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 03:40 am Title: Bruises and Bandages
Another really good chapter, I felt like the hospital scenes were pretty believable and realistic.
Too bad Pam can't go with Jim, because I would LOVE to see Jam in LA.
Oh well....
Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! The hospital scene was a bit challenging (thank goodness EmilyHalpert knows about all that medicine-y stuff), but I'm glad it came across as realistic. And I did ponder them going to LA together, but then I realized I'd have to write about another town I know nothing about, lol. We might still get to see some of Jim in the LA setting, but nothing too extensive. Thanks again; really glad you liked it!!