7 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2008 07:09 pm Title: "It's a lot to take in, isn't it?"
"But the strange new pieces of her life didn’t seem to have room for him."
That was heart breaking. I'm hooked - anxious to read the next one.
PS I didn't notice any rusty-ness at all!
Date: September 14, 2008 09:42 am Title: "It's a lot to take in, isn't it?"
Well, you don't really seem to be rusty! I like the idea and I'm looking forward to the next update.
Date: September 14, 2008 08:47 am Title: "It's a lot to take in, isn't it?"
Well - nothing like a nice, brisk flurry of writing to knock that rust off! I suggest you write MORE...SOON...and you will be nicely warmed up. (Does this count as begging?) Just in case you missed it - I loved this! Please don't leave us hanging too long.
Date: September 14, 2008 08:00 am Title: "It's a lot to take in, isn't it?"
This is gorgeous. I love the idea that Pam builds a new life full of color and beauty but still has tht old ache for him. And I can't wait to see how she ends up with Jeremy in her expensive shoes. Great work so far!
9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 07:26 pm Title: "It's a lot to take in, isn't it?"
Kestrel, this is so lovely and I'm really glad you're continuing with it.
This paragraph is especially fine: “I finally got the nerve to walk her home from church one day, and before we knew it I was walking her to our own little house.” Pam loved the inevitability of their courtship, its plainness like whorled wood. She pictured long skirts and sweet, almost-smiles, and maybe linked hands and wildflowers.
I hope we hear more from you soon.