10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 08:26 pm Title: chapter two: venting
Poor, poor Pam! I can totally imagine Karen being all "Haha I'm getting married to Jim and you're not!" I mean, I actually kind of liked her character but she was totally posessive. Ugh. Anyway, this is very well-written so far, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Favorite quote:
"It wasn’t Toby’s fault that Jim was marrying an awful woman with horrible tastes in wedding decorations. (Honestly, orange flowers? What the hell is that?)"
Orange flowers (though lovely outside of weddings) would be atrocious for a wedding. Unless it was like, Halloween themed. Which would be even worse than the flowers thing.
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 02:17 pm Title: chapter two: venting
AH!!!
i love this so much!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, Dwangie!111111111
Date: July 15, 2008 12:19 pm Title: chapter two: venting
Quick updates!!! Woo Hoo!!! I really love pissed off Pam. I feel her pain, I just hope she doesn't ask Dwight to borrow his throwing stars....it could get messy.
Author's Response: Haha! Yes, pissed Pam was bound to show up sometime, right? Thanks so much for the second review! I'm so happy I could hold your attention. The next chapter is on it's way!
Date: July 15, 2008 10:55 am Title: chapter two: venting
love it! if i were Pam i would have slapped Jim. please update soon. I gotta know what happens next.
Author's Response: Jim's definetly not acting like himself, is he? I can assure you teh next chapter will be up soon! Thanks so, so much for your review!
Date: July 15, 2008 08:26 am Title: chapter two: venting
I like the pace and style of this story. Just the right amount of angst and sarcasm. I especially like how even though Pam is sad about the impending wedding(?) she isn't all depressed about -- she is more pissed off than anything. I am not sure if this is the tone you are trying to set but if it is -- I like it. I like how even though Pam is pathetic (even in Toby's eyes) there is still a sense of stregnth to her.
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thanks so much! Yes, I like to think that Pam dosn't waste her time feeling sorry for herself, and that she's just angry at everyone. And while she is a little more than pathetic (all of season 3 I was like, "JUST SAY SOMTHING!") I hope that the next chapter will definetly justify her position. For the sake of this story, Karen is a Bridezilla. ;D Thanks for your review, Alamos, it realy means a lot!
Date: July 15, 2008 06:55 am Title: chapter two: venting
Poor Pam! It makes me a little sad too that Jim seems to be so happy... I loved the first chapter, and was going to review it, but you didn't give me a chance! Another chapter already :) How niiicce.
Curious to see where this is going!
Author's Response: Aha! Jim seems pretty happy, dosn't he? Yes, I've just had all these chapters in my head and had to write them down, so updating will be pretty frequent! I'm so glad I've captured your interest! Thanks so much for the review, 09imagine09!