10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 08:56 pm Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
WOWWWW. This has been pure awesomeness so far! And I totally know what's up with Will. ;) Can't wait to find out who person numero tres is, though! :D
Date: July 16, 2008 12:27 pm Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
INCREDIBLE!!!! Talk about a cliffhanger! I won't sleep well until this is resolved! Please continue...
Author's Response: Oh boy, well I hope you'll get some rest after this next chapter! :D
Date: July 16, 2008 08:05 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Nice job -- once again I am lovin' this new pissed off Pam. Again I like the "harshness" and honesty of the story. Especially hat even though it's filled w/ angst, you have not made Pam to be the victim. And the addition of the Karen's "best friend" is an interesting dynamic. I guess Karen has her own Pam. I think the best part for me was the paragraph that described Pam's revelation of how Jim felt when she was w/ Roy. Waiting to see who objected??? I have my guesses.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really trying to give all sides of the story so that no one will gang up on one character (except maybe Karen...), so it's so wonderful to hear that you recognize and appreciate that. Thanks for your review, Alamos!
Date: July 16, 2008 08:04 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Just read your three last chapters. Tense! Three objections, eh? That certainly doesn't bode well. Interested to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, your review means a lot, NanReg! I hope you're not disappointed!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 07:43 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
ohmigiddygod!
Ok, well I assume and voice is Pam's and another's is Will's but I have no idea who the third person is. PLEASE update quickly because I NEED to know!
Author's Response: Haha, the next chapter is coming! It's so awesome that you're so loyal, I know for sure all your answers will come with the next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 07:30 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Three voices??? I know who the two are but the third????
Author's Response: The next chapter will definetly answer all of your questions! Thanks for reviewing! (;
Date: July 16, 2008 06:49 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
what a cliffhanger!! nice!!
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 06:47 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Can't wait for more!
Date: July 16, 2008 06:35 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
The three voices... Pam and Will aaand... Jim would be nice wouldn't it? Yes Will should marry Karen, his long, lost love and Pam should have her big talk with Jim! Switching partners would be a nice idea! Or am I totally wrong... surprise me :P
Date: July 16, 2008 05:56 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUNNNNNNNNN!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for your review!
Date: July 16, 2008 05:52 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
OMG. Now I have to go to work and sit there all day trying figure out who the 3rd voice is!! (I have a good guess...)
Dawesome.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I hope you're a little suprised, I don't want everyone figuring out all my secrets (: