i love it! these last two chapters were perfect. i love the resolution and that it happened quickly, yet not perfectly. leaving it open ended is wonderful too. i'm assuming you're not writing an epilogue type thing? I think it's pretty incredible as is. anyway, i love love love it. great job! 

Well, I just read it in one-go and was really gutted that it had to end!

I loved every bit of it, and loved the supernatural element of it. It made it different and interesting and strangely believable. Well, if it had to happen, I'd like to think it would happen that way :P You make brilliant stories and I've been reading fanfics on here for far too long without commenting, due to the lack of an account... but after reading this guilt overwhelmed me and I HAD to create to applaud you on such a brill fic. Loved it to bits, and I especially love that Jim didn't just jump back in her arms. It was very true to House too, as it never does go right first time around. :P

Brilliant, I can't wait to read another one of your fics.

You know how much I love this story and I am so sad to see it end. But what an end. These two...much too stubborn for their own good. Good thing House is even more stubborn. Thank you for sharing.

10

So glad you finished, Moxie.  Great job with Pam, Jim AND House.  This story was such fun!

9

That was brill, an excellent read!
I'm a big fan of House and can I just say you were absolutely fantastic in writing his character and personality, brilliant!

On the story itself, I think Pam reacted exactly the way you expected her to have, but I feel Jim was slightly OOC, I can't imagine him acting the way he did.

If you think about it, just the week before "Ben Franklin" in "Back From Vacation" ,he's admitted he still has feelings for Pam, surely more than anything he wants her to feel the same way. At this point in time his relationship isn't that strong with Karen so it shouldn't really affect him so much. Ok Pam does drop a lot in on him at once, but if you think about it, she did the same on Beach Day, in front of all of their co-workers and Jims girlfriend, when Jim was much closer to moving on and actually leaving again, surely he'd have been angrier there on beach day? But he wasn't, he was quite understanding, and I just can't imagine him reacting this way.
Also the week after at Phylis' wedding, when the camera crew ask him what he would think if Pam was interested, he seems to light up at the possibility, so if Pam had told him her feelings like she did in this fic, I can't see him acting like such a jerk. I don't know, its the only minor aspect of the fic that bugged me, but I still loved it, House made me laugh so much he was brilliant, especially with Jim.

I can't wait for more of your stories!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, Noodles - I appreciate your comments.  My thoughts on what you've said regarding Jim are such:  I agree that perhaps he would have been more open to Pam's confession - and indeed by the next morning was pretty much on the road to her - but the interference of House put him on serious defense.  Besides not being sure of the relationship between House and Pam, the fact that Jim is such a private person means to me that having some strange guy talking so bluntly about such things is the fastest way to make Jim want to flee.  I think the fact that he still broke up with Karen the day after Pam told him says volumes for his reaction, deep down.  I think perhaps I could have made the distinction a little better that his negativity was House-related more than Pam-related. But I'm super glad you liked my version of House - he's just the best!