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Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2008 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is really good, and I've been enjoying it, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. More to come soon! :)

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2008 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4

I was so happy to see another update so quickly! You aim to please! Sorry about my confusing choice of words in my last review, but it was totally meant to be a compliment. I thought you "built up"  the tension beautifully with generalizations and left us hanging with the details surrounding Tey. You're definitely doing a great job with this and I can't wait for more.

 



Author's Response: Well then a huge THANK YOU! I'm almost surprised on how well this story is being taken. I wasn't sure when I started it if it would be like, but it seems to be well read. :) More will be coming soon...and it's another tough chapter. (I hope you like it.)

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2008 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is so sad... :(

Hopefully you make us happy again. I know I need it!

Author's Response: I know...this story is hard to write. But I'm glad that you like it. I'm a total fluff person, so it will be back...by the end of this, at least.

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