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Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2008 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

Grieving takes such different paths...sigh. How devastating for this family. I’ve heard that very few marriages survive the loss of child, but I think you‘ve given us hope that they‘ll make it---if they would just get some DANG GRIEF COUNCILING. AGH! It’s a bit hard to believe that they ALL haven’t seen a psychiatrist/therapist before now. Maybe that’s coming in another flashback. Please don’t rush this story along too fast. Your doing a beautiful job mixing the sorrow of the present with the happiness of the past.

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2008 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

This is so sad!

Make me happy now!

Author's Response: Um...okay? No, really thanks for reviewing! Though...I really can't promise anything else.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2008 07:03 am Title: Chapter 5

oh my gosh. that is SO sad. guh. this story has sucked me in. the anticipation of waiting to find out what happened to her was built up perfectly, but now my heart just breaks for them.  poor Jim and Pam. You write the sorrow of the situation so well. it's not too dramatic, but not too sappy or flippant either. i'm really enjoying it and i hope you update soon. they have to find their way back to each other, right?? :)

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2008 07:03 am Title: Chapter 5

oh my gosh. that is SO sad. guh. this story has sucked me in. the anticipation of waiting to find out what happened to her was built up perfectly, but now my heart just breaks for them.  poor Jim and Pam. You write the sorrow of the situation so well. it's not too dramatic, but not too sappy or flippant either. i'm really enjoying it and i hope you update soon. they have to find their way back to each other, right?? :)

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