5 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2008 02:43 pm Title: The Fire
I definitely feel like there could have been more to these... I love the idea, though.
7 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2008 06:19 pm Title: The Fire
Thanks for taking what could have been very angsty and instead making it a time for honest dialogue ending in a kiss!
Author's Response: aww thank you! Tried to find the balance between angst and fluff. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2008 03:46 pm Title: The Fire
I love this and I'm looking foward to E-mail Surveillance!
Date: September 17, 2008 09:12 am Title: The Fire
Aw. Yeah, I guess that ep would play differently for them than it does for us, who were desperate for some signs of the love between them. I also like that Jim tries to play it off with a joke at first before the serious conversation.
Author's Response: Sorry I'm lazy but the three of you who posted on this chapter get one response. I just wanted to say thanks for the encouragement, I was really worried about this chapter!
Date: September 17, 2008 08:47 am Title: The Fire
I like this road down memory lane. I think it's a nice parallel to the Jim and Pam story: reliving the moments of their love story.
Date: September 17, 2008 04:19 am Title: The Fire
Aw, yesssss! I loved it!
And the next one is going to be great, as well! Hurry hurry!