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Reviewer: Blind Assassin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2009 02:45 am Title: Chapter 8 Crazy He Calls Me

Lordy, jazzfan...I was so not expecting Alex to confront Jim in the garage! The guy is nuts! Who got shot...is Jim okay? Did Ryan absorb the bullets? Or, did Art Boy get what was coming to him? Why am I asking these questions...I should just read the next chapter, right?!!! Great job!

Author's Response: Yay, Alex was a surprise - and he definitely has issues of the postal persuasion. Turn the page, silly. Thanks.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 8 Crazy He Calls Me

Woah...first of all, how were you possibly thinking that this would be the last chapter!? lol. Wow...actually I wasn't expecting it to be Alex. For some reason I thought it was a professor or something. Wow, wow, wow...poor Jim. Poor Pam.  And now why the heck is Ryan there! Uh...so many questions!

I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!



Author's Response: I don't know, I guess I figured that finding out who the "bad guy" was would be the last chapter. I need to follow Dwight's advice - Would an idiot think that?rnYes. So I should not think that thing. *snork*rnAnyway, I'm tickled you didn't think it was Alex. And even after I dropped that line in the last chapter about him getting their new address? Most of your questions will get answered right away in the next chapter, but I am saving one little twist for the ending. *evil grin*rnThanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 8 Crazy He Calls Me

Oh... my... goodness! Ok, I kind of thought Alex might be behind everything, but I wasn't sure. And I NEVER thought he'd try to kill Jim!!! And how does Ryan fit into all of this? Are Ryan and Alex working together? When did they even meet? Oh, please, please, please let Jim be alright! I love this story! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Well thanks, SarahPlainandTall. I figured that folks would have Alex at the top of the suspect list, but would think he was after Pam (well - I guess he is after Pam but not that way...lol). You'll find out about Ryan's role and Jim's fate very soon. rnI really appreciate hearing about your reactions to the plot, it's always hard to know when you're writing this sort of thing, what people will think is going to happen.

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 8 Crazy He Calls Me

Oooooooooooooh my gosh. I freaking love this story, every chapter has left me hanging by a thread. I love the suspense, and it's all so realistic. Amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I felt kind of cheap for leaving this one where I did, but it was the only reasonable breaking point. Thanks so much for the read and the review.rn

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 11:34 am Title: Chapter 8 Crazy He Calls Me

Jazzfan, you busy little bee!  This chap is so tense and Alex is soooo creepy.  Yikes.  Glad that you're well into the next chap because I'm dying here! 

Author's Response: Thanks NanReg, I won't leave you hanging very long this time. (TWSS)

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