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Reviewer: Blind Assassin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2009 02:52 am Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

Officer Scarne!!! Nice touch. I think I may have guessed what Ryan's deal is but then again you've led me down a blind alley before now! :) Can wait to read more. Also, can I petition you to call the pooch Voldermort...so cute and so Pam and Jim? BA

Author's Response: Of course I've lead you down a blind alley, you're a Blind Assasin. What were you expecting? *grin* Seriously, thanks, and if you know what Ryan's deal is, please PM me. Because I don't. Thanks for the review and I will only promise that in the next chapter, the dog does get a name.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2009 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

jazz, how many twists and turns can you squeeze into one story????  Here I go off on a wee little trip across the pond and you've thrown in MORE things I hadn't anticipated.  I don't believe Ryan and I really want to know what Pam needs to tell Jim.

And I knew that slimy Alex was up to no good!  So, how injured is he? 

I hope you post another chapter soon!  (Am I back on the preview list?!?!?)



Author's Response: Hey, mis thang world traveller, it's great to see you back. All will be revealed next chapter, and of course I'd love for you to save me from my run on sentences, etc. The real question is, what are they going to name the dog? Thanks, and welcome home.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

Officer Scarne. ::snort::

Uh, poor Jim with a collapsed lung! This is scary stuff. I really can't imagine what else you've got up your sleeve here. Hope we don't have to wait too long! :-)



Author's Response: I really felt bad about beating up poor Jim in this one, because I didn't start out to do that but it "served the story." I've promised my fictional Mr. Halpert that the next story I write he gets all the good lines and some lovin' instead of baseball bats upside the head. *grin* I'm out next week and then I'll get cracking on the end. Thanks LoveFool.

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

because Alex is going to leap out of his hospital bed and try to strangle Pam with his IV cord!!!!!
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... and that's why you're writing the story, not me :P Great work, as per usual!

Author's Response: Pam would kick his ass. Thanks, untherapy, for reading and reviewing, much appreciated.

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

Officer Scarne??? You did that on purpose! This story just gets better and better! I'm so glad it's not over yet. What's Pam's big announcement? Oh, and by the way, if Jim needs an in-home nurse, I'd be happy to take the job :)

Author's Response: No, of course I didn't do it on purpose. Office Scarne just showed up at the scene - what can I say? If you're volunteering to take care of Mr. Halpert, be ready to take on Pam, because she thinks she's got the job. As to the announcement, maybe Pam has finally picked out a name for the dog? Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: Mountaineers02 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 10:34 am Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

I love this story, jazzfan! Please keep updating as soon as you can. I knew that skeevy Alex couldn't be trusted. And is that Officer Michael Scarne? If so, brilliant :-)

Author's Response: Alex is a full blown psychopath after all. Just goes to show Jim he should have trusted his instincts, right? I'm not aware of Officer Scarne's first name (I just saw his last name on the badge), but maybe I should do some research. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2009 10:05 am Title: Chapter 9 Everything Happens to Me

Whew. *sigh of relief*  Awesome job, lady.  BTW, love the mention of Agent Officer Scarne :)  Another surprise you say?!  Can't wait! 

Author's Response: Thanks Nan, Officer Scarne - I couldn't resist.

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